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Title: Chapter 30 27 Sep 2008 10:42 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, glad they had a great time in diagon alley and had some fun before going back to school again

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Yes, it was good for Harry to get out, have a relaxing time with his friends, just like any other kid.  Back close to the beginning, there was a part where Ron had invited Harry over, and Harry had to write back and say no, and he feared that he wouldn't get to see his friends anymore, so I wanted to show that that isn't happening, that Severus is trying really hard to give Harry what he needs, including his friends, even if it's hard for Severus himself.  Thanks again!  
Title: Chapter 29 12 Sep 2008 4:08 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 29 11 Sep 2008 8:37 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a nice piece about Harry's subject choosing. Working out timetables is such a pain!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! 

    >>>Working out timetables is such a pain! 

    I totally agree!

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

Title: Chapter 29 11 Sep 2008 3:58 am
Reviewer: dancegirl01mom (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 29 10 Sep 2008 8:24 pm
Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great chapter! i am still wondering about those 2 horcruxes... Also, why does Harry need to know about the history of dark lords, if voldemort is dead??

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much!  What do you want to know about the horcruxes...maybe I could tell you if you really want to know.  As for the history of dark wizards, yes, Voldie is dead, but unfortunately there will always be dark and dangerous wizards.  There was Grindelwald (sp?) before Voldemort, probably someone else before him.  I think the books say that Voldemort was the most powerful dark wizard in a century...but that implies that there have been other powerful wizards too.  SC isn't going to become a procession of one great dark lord after another, lol...I'd much rather concentrate  on the emotional aspects than an action-based story, but there are still some rather powerful DEs out there and in the sequel, probably some of the ones from Azkaban are going to escape, be released, etc.

    But as for Harry thinking about needing to know the history, it's more because at this point, he's thinking he might become an Auror and he was just trying to decide which courses would be useful to him.  He was kind of idly thinking that if he knew more about how other dark wizards were defeated, it might come in handy at some point.

    Thanks again! 

Title: Chapter 29 10 Sep 2008 7:59 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, more warm fuzzies again!!!

    I'm stocking up on tissues, even though I'm hoping I won't need them again! ;)

    I'm really excited about where Severus' and Harry's relationship is going. They are really beginning to interact like father and son.

    Please update soon; I'm really enjoying your story.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Well, I suppose I can't make any promises about the tissues, lol!  

    >>>I'm really excited about where Severus' and Harry's relationship is going. 

    Oh, thank you!  Me, too, and they are very much like father and son now.

    I'll try to update again asap! 

     

     

Title: Chapter 29 10 Sep 2008 6:47 pm
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. Keep it up.!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll try!
Title: Chapter 29 10 Sep 2008 6:43 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    That was good.

    Is there no way for there to be a potions instructor for the 1st - 3rd years. That way, Severus could take the advanced ones starting in the 4th year. By that time, the ones who really enjoy potions could be "weeded" out of the main group and placed in an advanced group. The rest could continue with the other instructor until they got to the point where they no longer needed to take potions.

    To have a potions master teach 11 - 13 years old is a waste.

    Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I agree with you about it maybe being a nice idea to have an instructor for the younger ones and I've considered it.  I may have that happen at some point.  I also really do think that Severus would be much more content if he could concentrate on research and developing new potions, rather than instructing, so I do picture him leaving Hogwarts once Harry's finished there.  But of course he'll stay until then, to be there for Harry.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 29 10 Sep 2008 6:19 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh I feel so bad for Severus feeling insecure, it must be awful for him to still feel like he could lose Harry to the Weasleys, i dont think Harry ever would now, maybe a little reassurance is needed for poor old Sev : ) brilliant chapter as usual : )

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, I think Severus has his own insecurities, too, definitely...he just does a better job of hiding them, even to himself at times.  And no, I don't think Harry would leave him now either.  It might be something for them to discuss in the future.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 28 05 Sep 2008 11:43 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll try!

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