| Title: Chapter 26
| 17 Aug 2008 8:03 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Nice to see a supportive Ron and Hermione, and a Hermione that is not a nag.
I agree with Ron and Hermione, Draco has gotten off too easily, and what will he learn from it? He owes Harry reparation and a personal apology, maybe even being his slave for a week to drive home the consequences of his actions. Being let off with a slap on the wrist which detentions are, will teach him nothing. Malfoy needs to loose something he highly values.
Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoy writing Ron and Hermione. As for Draco, I have to grin at your comments because I think you're reading my mind, lol! I completely agree about him!
| Title: Chapter 26
| 16 Aug 2008 7:43 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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This story is coming along excellently! I'm glad Severus saved Harry. I always wondered what would happen if Snape allowed himself to be killed for 2 minutes and then brought back--like with a shock to the heart or something! I bet the slavery spell can't exist if another bond is put in place, eh? Seeing their developing relationship is terriffic. I can't wait to see what happens to Malfoy!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very happy you're enjoying it. It is an interesting question about Severus, but I don't know if he'd agree to try something like that because it is so risky...trying to bring someone back doesn't always work, and as much as he wants his freedom, Harry would never want to risk losing Severus for it. That may come up in the sequel. As for Draco, I have plans for him, but I admit that probably some people won't like it...some might say it's pure revenge or too harsh, others might not think it's harsh enough. It will be a case of the punishment fitting the crime, though.
Great job on this chapter, I really liked the interaction between Harry and his friends. I'd love to see what happened if Hermion eand Ron did decide to get revenge on Malfoy, especially considering that they'd be able to get discounted (free?) products of Fred and George, but Harry made a good piont about them possibly taking it too far.
Author's Response: Thank you! Oh, that could be lots of fun if Hermione and Ron went all out! I don't know if I'm creative enough to write it well, though. We'll see...Ron and Hermione, and Severus too for that matter, aren't going to be too happy with Draco, that's for sure. But Harry does have a point, I thought, too.
yay for severus being back next time. i really like his interaction with harry, more than the golden trio, though i agree that it was probably necessary to have them in there... can't always get what you want, i suppose. i'm glad harry wasn't mad at sev about this. please update soon
Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing Harry and Severus together (obviously, huh?), but I like writing the Trio, too. I love Hermione and Ron. I'll try to update again in a few days.
GREAT chapter! I'm looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you!
As usual, great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked it!
aww i love the way harry is always so suprised when someone stands by him or tells him they love him, he's so vulnerable and cute! great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, poor Harry...he does have a hard time believing that anyone really loves him because he feels unworthy, deep inside. But Severus, Ron, and Hermione will do their best to convince him otherwise.
| Title: Chapter 26
| 15 Aug 2008 7:15 am
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| Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Anonymous)
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I'm glad Snape told Ron & Hermione about the spell. One less thing for Harry to worry about. Good chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, that's what Severus was thinking too. He knew that Harry really wanted his friends, but was afraid of having to tell them about the spell, so he decided he would do it for him.
good friends are a good thing
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, absolutely. Ron and Hermione being around and supporting him is another big step in helping Harry to heal.
Yay for the update! I'm glad their visit went well. Hopefully seeing them will help make Harry feel better too. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I think seeing Ron and Hermione again will be a big help to Harry.
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