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Title: Chapter 24 04 Aug 2008 3:48 am
Reviewer: Night_Childe25 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww...I'm trying to keep myself from crying. Great chapter. It was very touching. Thanks so much and please update soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  The next chapter is finished, just waiting to hear back from my betas.
Title: Chapter 5 03 Aug 2008 11:58 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Loving the story so far! You're style of writing keeps pulling me in deeper.

    -JW.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind reviews!
Title: Chapter 4 03 Aug 2008 11:37 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    I feel so bad for Harry. You're doing an incredible job with this story!

    -JW.
Title: Chapter 3 03 Aug 2008 11:20 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    I was so worried you were going to say they had to share a soul or something like that, or Harry had lost his magic... interesting twist you have put on things! I'm thoroughly enjoying reading your style of writing.

    -JW.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 03 Aug 2008 10:49 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, you are an awesome writer, and I bow, humbled by your creativity.

    -JW.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I've enjoyed your stories as well!
Title: Chapter 24 01 Aug 2008 5:54 am
Reviewer: plantsmart731 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was so beautiful. Thank God for Kleenex. I love your writing. Please don't take too long for an update. And that was very wise to post your message at the beginning. I am off to check out your group.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you're enjoying "Slave Child"!  I'm going to try to update again sometime this weekend.
Title: Chapter 24 31 Jul 2008 7:38 pm
Reviewer: Mahi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this chapter. It was great. I like that Severus admitted to Harry that he loves him like a son and that Harry finally gets someone to love him like a parent. The emotional scene was beautifully written! Cant wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it.  It was fun to write.  I've been looking forward to this chapter for a long time.
Title: Chapter 24 31 Jul 2008 8:15 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I haven't reviewed till now because I was wary of reading this story, do to some of the warnings. However, I kept hearing all these great comments and finally decided to cave in and read it.

    I'm glad I did, though I wasn't comfortable with the thought of Harry ending his life, I understand why he wants to so badly join his family. The emotions in this story are very strong, I can really understand the characters!

    I like that you took a slow development with Sev and Harry's relationship and built up to a point where Sev decided to change his ways of thinking and acting around Harry. It makes it much more realistic over a quick little jump. I’m happy you have humor to lighten up things after dark moments too.

    I'm so glad Sev got there in time to stop Harry and that Harry stopped to think! It’s great they finally talked things out and that they plan to take new plans to improve things.

    I look forward to reading more of this story and hope you'll post the next chapter soon! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so glad you decided to give it a chance and that you approve of Harry's and Severus' relationship.  I'll try to update again sometime this weekend. 
Title: Chapter 24 30 Jul 2008 6:20 am
Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awww... this was worth the wait! *hugs severus, harry and kristeh*

    i know that this is only the first step in healing harry... hope that this story continues the journey.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, this is the first step, but they do still have a ways to go. 
Title: Chapter 24 30 Jul 2008 12:16 am
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I heard about your story in AFLNO group. I read all of it today at work and almost got caught twice, but was unable to put it down.

    I think the way you deal with Harry's suicidal thoughts is incredibly sensitive and well written.

    Thanks for a remarkable story. Please update soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm really glad you liked it, though I don't want you to get into trouble at work, lol!  I'll try to update again sometime this weekend.

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