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Title: Chapter 24 28 Jul 2008 9:20 pm
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    Gah! I'm crying! Kristeh, that was amazing! It was so sweet, and beautiful, and...oh, man! It was perfect.
    I loved it. It was beautiful.
    -Elise

    Author's Response: Thank you, Elise!
Title: Chapter 24 28 Jul 2008 5:37 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Sniff. Harry's method of suicide was an excellent illustration of how much the slavery spell bothers him, as is his continuing refusal to let anyone else know about it.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  You know, I actually had another method in mind, had discussed with my betas, but in the end, when I was writing, this was the way that 'flowed'.  And yes, Harry is still very devestated by the slavery spell.  It's something that Severus and his friends are going to have to help him with. 
Title: Chapter 24 28 Jul 2008 5:34 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    NICE!!!!!!!! I really like this chapter. Please update soon. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Whew, update soon?  I'll try, lol, at least by next weekend, okay?
Title: Chapter 24 28 Jul 2008 4:27 pm
Reviewer: Ksenezka (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think this is one of the best chapters of anything I've ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I have so long waited this moment.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I've been waiting for this chapter a long time, too.  It was one of my favorites to write, but almost a little scary, too, since I'd had it in my mind for so long.
Title: Chapter 24 28 Jul 2008 4:08 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was on of those chapters that made me feel all squishy inside. You did a great job with their emotions.

    I think my favorite part was when Severus realized that Harry was going to go past the wards and be killed. That was a terrible moment and I felt it along with Severus. Very well done, Kristeh.

    I am glad Severus told Harry how he feels. Severus' feelings were tangible. And it was great to see that Harry finally knows that he is cared about.

    I was really glad you talked about the spell, because it's such a big part of Harry's thoughts right now. It was so sad that he didn't want to go down to the Ministry and get adopted, because of the spell. Sigh. What a very sad lot for both of them. I hope we finally get to see some hope soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  It was very important for Harry to understand how much Severus' really loves him...that will help him more than anything to heal and to find the will to live again.  Yes, the spell is a huge deal, and they still have a lot to talk about in regards to it, but they've made a start.
Title: Chapter 24 28 Jul 2008 3:35 pm
Reviewer: lisas_castle (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwwwww!! I think this is one of the best chapters of anything I've ever read!

    Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!
Title: Chapter 24 28 Jul 2008 2:47 pm
Reviewer: ankita (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awesome chapter...i can't say more...it was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 24 28 Jul 2008 2:35 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Anonymous) [Report This]
    so sad!! but a good chapter nonetheless

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 24 28 Jul 2008 12:45 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    aww that made me feel all warm and fuzzy! i was smiling by the time i got to the declarations of love at the end, im really looking forward to seeing their relationship develops now thay have said it, brilliant chapter as always

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it!  Yes, I'm looking forward to Harry's and Severus' relationship developing, too.
Title: Chapter 23 23 Jul 2008 11:29 pm
Reviewer: footontheground (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job! I can't wait to see how Severus finds out what Harry is up to!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll try to update again soon! 

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