Potions and Snitches
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Reviews For Slave Child
Title: Chapter 42 23 Feb 2014 3:19 am
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am still enjoying this story.
Title: Chapter 36 19 Feb 2014 4:41 am
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ah, I wonder what is going on with young Mister Malfoy? He is acting particularly strange. I am intrigued.

    Author's Response: Lol, yes, Draco is acting mysteriously, isn't he?  Thanks!
Title: Chapter 31 18 Feb 2014 5:10 am
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm looking forward to seeing how things go for Severus and Harry now that they are back at Hogwarts. I adore how protective Severus is towards Harry.

    Author's Response: Thank you for all the kind reviews!  I really appreciate it!
Title: Chapter 29 18 Feb 2014 3:14 am
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am enjoying these father-son type interactions between Severus and Harry.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I loved writing those scenes too.
Title: Chapter 20 17 Feb 2014 2:48 am
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow!! My heart was racing the entire time. You did such an amazing job with this chapter. It was quick, lightening speed, yet also very clear and easy to follow. I know you say that it is difficult for you to write action sequences; but, if you had not said so in the writer's notes, I would never in a million guess that. Fantastic chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it.  I do remember that chapter being very difficult to write.
Title: Chapter 17 16 Feb 2014 11:39 pm
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am loving this so much. I especially adore that Snape has invited Harry to call him Severus. I also love that Harry intuitively realizes that if he doesn't it will hurt Snape's feelings. And, above all, I love that Harry doesn't want to hurt Severus' feelings. That's just so---- aaww!

    I occurs to me, Snape is being really great, and I don't want to take away from that. However, Harry is being really great also. He is not being petulant or resentful towards Snape, not even in his private thoughts. Both of them deserve major props. :) :)

    Author's Response: Thanks again.  Yes, Harry is being very open to seeing Severus in a new light, too.  Perhaps its a bit OOC, but I think the slavery spell and everything that has happened since has had a big effect on Harry and he's feeling very insecure and unsure of things right now. 
Title: Chapter 12 16 Feb 2014 9:44 pm
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This scene is so sweet in its simplicity; yet so full of unspoken emotion. i love it. it made me tear up, just a little. Wonderful, evocative writing:

    He blinked several times and swallowed before looking up at Severus, meeting his eyes for the first time in days.

    "Thank you."

    Severus had had doubts about returning the cloak...in the past, he had highly disapproved of the way Harry had used it to sneak about, and he had fully intended to lecture and warn the boy about using it wisely. But somehow, looking down into Harry's shining eyes, he couldn't bring himself to ruin the moment. He could save the lecture for later, he supposed.

    Instead he replied softly, "You're welcome."

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  It's nice to have a new reader again.
Title: Chapter 11 16 Feb 2014 9:24 pm
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I enjoyed this chapter. I like the way you describe Prince Hall. I can envision it so clearly that it feels nearly like I am actually there. I imagine that it looks a bit like Downton Abbey.

    Author's Response: Oh, I LOVE Highclere Castle!  I fell in love with it way back in the 1980's when it was Misselthwaite Manor in Hallmark's "The Secret Garden".  I'd watch Downton Abbey even if I didn't like the plot (which I do) just to see Highclere, lol!  And though Alnwick Castle is lovely, to me, Glamis Castle in Scotland is the PERFECT Hogwarts, and its how I picture Hogwarts in my own mind.
Title: Chapter 9 16 Feb 2014 8:52 pm
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Finally, Severus is beginning to see what Harry is truly like.

    Author's Response: Yes, slowly but surely.  Many people have a difficult time admitting that they were in the wrong, and Severus even more so than most, but he's getting there. 
Title: Chapter 5 16 Feb 2014 7:48 pm
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am enjoying this very much.

    Author's Response: Thanks, glad you're enjoying it.

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