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Title: Chapter 21 12 Jul 2008 1:07 am
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Kristeh. Oh, oh, oh...
    I cried. On the last part I cried. It was so sad, so heartbreaking...poor Severus! Oh, I can't imagine how awful he must feel.

    But I love that you used the bit from Potion-itis in this. That's one of my absolute favorite stories, and it fits really well here.

    Oh, wow. Just wow. The whole thing was amazingly wonderful. I loved it.

    One of my favorite parts was when the Weasleys were trying to get Albus to let them take Harry, and Sev was being so territorial. "He's mine, Weasleys!" That was so in character for Severus. It was perfect.

    Well, I just wanted to tell you how awesome this was. I can't wait for chapter 22! I'm sure it'll be just as great.

    Your #1 Fan,
    -Elise

    Author's Response:

    Hi, Elise!  Thank you!  Yes, Severus does feel badly right now, but though I feel sorry for him, I also think he deserves it, too.  He was pretty awful to Harry for years.  Heh, I was writing and before I knew it those lines just popped out of Ron's mouth.  Then I thought, 'Well, it could fit here, too' so I left it.

    Yes, Severus is feeling a little insecure around the Weasleys now.  It's an area he'll need to work on.  Thanks again.  I'd love to read more of your stories, too!

     

Title: Chapter 20 10 Jul 2008 7:19 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Voldemort is dead?! That was unexpected but that's great! Wonderful chapter and I can't wait to read what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 20 09 Jul 2008 3:36 pm
Reviewer: ankita (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awesome....atleast voldie is dead...waiting for the next one...

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 20 09 Jul 2008 11:41 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    yay volde is dead! i think the action scene was fine it got all the important things in without too much waffle which is how i think one should be, im really looking forward to the next chapter though, i also love a juicy bit of angst! just a question though, did i miss something in a previous chapter that said harry would be released from the slavery spell if voldemort died? or is that comment he made about being free yet to be explained? i hope you decide to keep him with snape i cant wait to see how their relationship develops, bring on the angst!! lol

    Author's Response:

    Oh, thank you!  No, Harry won't be freed from the slavery spell just because of Voldemort's death.  His thoughts about being free are referring to his decision to kill himself once he'd defeated Voldemort.  Harry sees his death as a means of freedom right now.

Title: Chapter 20 09 Jul 2008 7:50 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Geez...
    Somebody kill that BellaBitch already

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Yeah, Bella's pretty bad, isn't she?
Title: Chapter 20 09 Jul 2008 4:45 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a great chapter. I can't wait to find out how exactly Harry killed Voldemort, and the way he ran off to help his friends is very in character XD

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll explain more about how Harry killed Voldie in chapter 21, but it's really not a big secret or anything original.  You can figure it out on your own probably.  I did think Harry would find it hard to hide in safety when others are in danger, too.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 8:53 pm
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    You really have mastered the evil cliffhanger, haven't you? Hee hee. (Well, I'm not laughing really. I'm quaking in my boots over what just happened to Harry...)

    I have the same question as another reviewer, which will wait to be resolved in maybe the next chapter? If Harry *does* die (even momentarily because I can't imagine you killing him off) how does this affect the slave bond?

    Poor Severus. He's so attached to Harry now I imagine he'll be going into a full fledge panic attack soon if Harry's looking like he's at death's door.

    Gee, think you can pump out another chapter as fast as you did this one? My fingernails may not survive it if you don't!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Cathy! 

    >>>You really have mastered the evil cliffhanger, haven't you?

    I suppose so...that's what people keep telling me!  I just stop when I think it's at a point that will keep people wanting more...can I help it if people call me evil, lol?

    The question about Harry dying and the effects on the slave bond is very interesting...and that's all I'm going to say about that!

    Yes, Severus is going to be all angsty, dealing with Harry's injuries and feeling regrets over his own actions...poor guy.  I'll try to get the next chapter up soon.  Thanks again! 

     

Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 8:21 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting that you chose to have George lose his ear in this universe as well as canon. I was flabbergasted that you killed Voldemort already. This will definitely bring Harry's suicidal tendencies to the fore since he defeated Voldemort and didn't die.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Well, I thought it might be a little more realistic if the good guys didn't come out of battle unscathed, but at least I didn't kill them off. 

    >>>I was flabbergasted that you killed Voldemort already.

    Well, the story is about Severus' and Harry's relationship really.  Voldemort's defeat is secondary, and it needed to happen before other events could.  But there's still a lot planned...we're not close to the end.  And yep, Harry's suicidal tendencies will become obvious before much longer. 

Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 8:02 pm
Reviewer: Tsuby (Signed) [Report This]
    No cliffie, please, please!! I need more! :)
    By the way, I perfectly understand that you find it difficult to write action scenes. It's the same for me, well maybe for me it's the dialogues... anyway... I loved this chapter, really great as usual!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  It's funny how we all have our preferences on reading and writing, isn't it?    
Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 6:49 pm
Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) [Report This]
    That was an incredible chapter. I totally loved it. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon, and by soon I mean today. ;)

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  So much needed to happen in this chapter, I was almost scared of writing it, so I'm really glad you enjoyed it.  Well, 21 probably won't happen today, but I'll try to get it up before the weekend.

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