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Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 6:30 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ANOTHER CLIFFE! :( I'm very sad now! LOL!!:) Great chapter! I noticed that you, like JKR, do not want george to keep his ear. Lol. Please update soon. The suspense is killing me!
    Again, GREAT WORK!
    Thanks.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I think I'm famous for cliffies, or maybe infamous is the better term, lol.  As for George and his ear, well, at least I'm not killing everyone off like JKR did.  I'll try to update again soon, thanks!

     

Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 5:45 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    Voldemort is dead yeah but you never turn your back on Bellatrix...glad that everyone saw Sev being tortured by Voldie for being a traitor so it would be publically known that he was on the side of light...question if Harry dies for like less than a minute and is revived would the slave bond be broken???

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Yep, Bellatrix is evil.  To me, she's as bad as Voldemort himself, if not worse.  And yes, it is good that now no one can question Severus' allegiance.

    >>>if Harry dies for like less than a minute and is revived would the slave bond be broken???

    Interesting question, *evil grin* 

      

Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 5:40 pm
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great Chapter! Loved the action. Can't wait for the angst and mush part,I love it to.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you liked the action part.  I was very nervous about writing this chapter; maybe one reason it's so short.  Mush and angst coming up, yes!
Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 5:20 pm
Reviewer: kittykat91419 (Signed) [Report This]
    Gah! Cliffie!! Hopefully there is more soon. I think you did very well with the action.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, I'll probably begin chapter 21 in a couple of days.
Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 4:41 pm
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoot!!!! Freaking good. keep it up

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 4:05 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Short but excellent! Actually, I think short and exciting is the best way to deal with battles. And I don't mind at all that Voldemort's death was what some might consider anti-climatic. Actually, I think it is better that way. It's harder to make a martyr of him. I know that Sev and Harry will eventually be all right but I hope someone gets Bella real quick! Good work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  We definitely don't want old Voldie becoming a martyr...he doesn't deserve that.  As for dear Bella, she'll be on her way to Azkaban again soon, but she may be one of the villains in the sequel.
Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 2:27 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    What a horrible place to leave us, please update soon. Awesome story by the way.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll try.
Title: Chapter 19 07 Jul 2008 11:15 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh! Definitely the wrong time! (;
    That ending was totally unexpected. Does Snape find out about Harry's suicide plans after this escapade? Do they stand and fight, or apparate away? I thought the book was a nice touch. The reference to Ron and Hermione was clever too. Was Gladrags your idea? I don't remember it from the book.
    Oh, is Severus supposed to be angry when Harry touches his arm (not at him obviously), because the 'besides' makes it sound as though he is angry plus something. Do you really mean it like that?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Severus will find out about the suicide plans, but not for a little bit yet.  Glad you liked the book.  No, Gladrags is not my idea...well, I read that there is a store called Gladrags Wizardwear on the HP lexicon, but I made it very prestigious and expensive.  I'm not sure if it really is.  I don't know where it's mentioned in the HP books, but it must be somewhere since it's in the lexicon.

    No, Severus is not angry at all when Harry touches his arm.  He's emotional...maybe a little surprised, but glad and hopeful that Harry is beginning to forgive him and feel more comfortable with him...but Severus is still uncertain about displaying his emotions and he's reserved, and Harry isn't sure what to make of the emotions he can see in Severus' eyes.

    Thanks again!   

Title: Chapter 19 07 Jul 2008 4:58 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a wonderful chapter (in spite of the cliffie!) and I loved Harry's birthday present. Why do I get a feeling that Severus and Harry's polyjuice will run out before they can get home? I can hardly wait to find out what happens next.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yep, I think their cover is about to be busted.  I hope I can get chapter 20 finished soon and update again.
Title: Chapter 19 07 Jul 2008 12:40 pm
Reviewer: ankita (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hey am waiting really with bated breath....
    anywayz take your time i understand
    all the best

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I've begun chapter 20.  Not sure how long it'll take me to finish it, but I'm going to work on it some more tonight.

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