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Title: Chapter 17 06 Jul 2008 6:34 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. If you are bigheaded fpor creating a yahoo group then I am to, lol. I have had one for a few weeks, lol. I enjoyed this chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks, Scorpia!
Title: Chapter 19 06 Jul 2008 1:57 am
Reviewer: lil jo jo (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG wat kind of CLIFFY IS THATTTTTT????


    UPDATEEE nOW

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I'll try to soon!
Title: Chapter 19 05 Jul 2008 5:26 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter of Severus showing Harry the parental attention he has never really had. I loved the book that he got Harry--so appropriate--and what it tells Harry about how Severus is going to treat him the next year. I also liked this little descriptive detail: "Harry smiled as he watched an older couple, holding hands even while they bickered over which shop to visit next and whether the price of an enchanted tea set was too high. He found himself thinking of Ron and Hermione for some reason," Very sweet. And then, when we're about ready to die from the over-consumption of sugar--Voldie appears. Evil woman! ;-)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I said it before, the 'Wronski book' scene was my favourite part of the chapter, because it was something that Severus did purely for Harry's enjoyment, and it is a clue that Severus will not revert back to his old ways once they're back at school, if Harry picked up on that.  Thanks again!  
Title: Chapter 19 05 Jul 2008 10:28 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, evil cliffie. I almost had a heart attack when I read the first line of your Chapter End Notes - that was truly evil. Huzzah for Harry confiding in Severus, and I really like the way you have him consciously struggling to call him Severus, not Snape.

    Author's Response: Thank you, and yes, I think it is rather hard for Harry to start thinking of Severus by his first name after five years of thinking of him as 'Snape'.  It's also a big sign that they're becoming closer and Harry isn't sure he's ready for them to be that close, but he's making an effort, and it's getting a little easier for him. 
Title: Chapter 19 05 Jul 2008 7:13 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I knew there was an evil cliffy coming! Please don't kill us readers with suspense for too long... Good chapter by the way! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll try to update again soon.
Title: Chapter 19 05 Jul 2008 6:20 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    oh my gosh what a cliffie! i'm glad you were kidding about the break. this was an intriguing chapter... harry is teetering on the verge of trusting severus... but now DE's are here to throw a monkey wrench into the works!!!

    is harry still going to feel suicidal now that snape is treating him so much better?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Yes, Harry is still suicidal right now.  He is happier than he was at first, but part of that is because he's built up this idea that he'll be able to go be with his parents and Sirius and then everything will be perfect, and until then he just has to make the best of things.  He isn't consciously thinking, "Oh, I'm happier now so I should reconsider the whole suicide thing."  He's just going along until he can be with his 'real' family again.  The idea that he's going to get to be with his family and be free again, hopefully soon, is very ingrained at this point and it's really part of what is helping him to feel better.  He doesn't really have to think about the slavery spell and the impact it's going to have on his whole life as long as he's convinced himself that it's only a temporary situation.

    I realised that may seem to contradict what I said in an earlier response, when I said that the slavery spell is never far from Harry's mind, but what I mean is that Harry hasn't forgotten about the slavery spell, but he's not really having to deal with it because he's decided that he's going to escape it through death and be with his loved ones as soon as possible.

    Thanks again! 

      

Title: Chapter 19 05 Jul 2008 12:26 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. It's good to see Harry happy. The only mistake was in Sev's eye color while Harry was looking into them. He was still under polyjuice and was blue eyed not black.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Oops, you're right about the eye colour.  I need to go back and fix that.  Thanks!
Title: Chapter 19 04 Jul 2008 8:24 pm
Reviewer: darkwish (Signed) [Report This]
    oh BLEEEP! HIIIIIIIDE!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I wonder if Sev and Harry will listen to your advice, Hmmm?
Title: Chapter 19 04 Jul 2008 7:56 pm
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, man...that cliffie was evil personified. I don't think Voldy is showing up to give Harry a surprise birthday party (or is he? Hmmm....)

    I really enjoyed their shopping excursion and Harry finally really being treated special for his birthday. Hey, can I find those magically altering clothes somewhere for my kids! That was a brilliant invention.

    You're writing on the next chapter as I type this, right? Right?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Cathy!  Well, if causing destruction, attempted murder, and general mayhem is your idea of acceptable birthday party activities, why then Voldie's just come to join in the fun, lol.

    I need the magically altering clothes for my kids too.  If only...

    Well, I'm not writing yet, but I will in another day or so.  Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 19 04 Jul 2008 7:44 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ALL OF YOUR LOYAL FANS?!!!! LOL! Seriously though, this chapter was GREAT! Hate the cliffie though. But yes (sighes) they keep us on our toes. PLEASE!!!!!!!update soon!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I really, really hate cliffies, too, when I'm the reader.  I guess I'm a hypocrite *sigh*.  I'll try to update again soon though!

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