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Title: Chapter 18 30 Jun 2008 7:12 pm
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A very nice chapter,I like that Harry wants to trust Severus and that Severus is being patient,Father and Son? Hmmm,are they thinking along the same lines then? Can hardly wait until Harry learns to truly trust Sev.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I think Harry's making progress, isn't he?  I think it was the first time that he realised he 'sort of' wanted to confide in Severus, even if he isn't ready to do so yet.  And yep, the 'father/son' polyjuice might have been a subtle hint on Sev's part. 
Title: Chapter 18 30 Jun 2008 7:06 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was kind of funny. Sev is really sneaky, making them look like father and son. All in all I think this was a good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, Severus isn't a Slytherin for nothing, is he?  Glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 18 30 Jun 2008 6:19 pm
Reviewer: lisas_castle (Signed) [Report This]
    Happy birthday Harry! ;) I'm hoping this "father/son" trip can help Harry open up a little to Severus? Thanks for the new chapter, this is one of my favorite stories!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I have a feeling it will be a very eventful birthday for Harry, *snickers evilly*.
Title: Chapter 17 29 Jun 2008 12:44 am
Reviewer: Tsuby (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, so angsty and so wonderful. I can't stop reading and re-reading this story. I love the way you write and I wish I could write as well in English! I am sorry I could not review sooner, because this story deserved it, but I only had time to read (and not much of that too!). Thank you again for telling us such wonderful stories.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  And I think your English is fantastic! 
Title: Chapter 17 29 Jun 2008 12:44 am
Reviewer: Tsuby (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, so angsty and so wonderful. I can't stop reading and re-reading this story. I love the way you write and I wish I could write as well in English! I am sorry I could not review sooner, because this story deserved it, but I only had time to read (and not much of that too!). Thank you again for telling us such wonderful stories.
Title: Chapter 17 28 Jun 2008 12:25 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    long live the muse!! i really appreciate the regular updates, i hate waiting for anything (i know,brat!) The starting relationship is so cute with snape trying to be nice to harry, bless him!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I certainly hope she'll be long-lived, and since I'm about the most impatient person in the world, I guess I can't call you a brat, can I?  Glad you like Sev and Harry! 
Title: Chapter 17 27 Jun 2008 8:34 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Arh I love this part of the story, they're just starting to really understand and care for one another. I liked how Harry wanted to make Snape happy not just out of fear but out of feeling. And I love awkward, nerve-crunching endings, where you feel strangely Happy for the characters but embarassed for them as well.
    Bravo.
    And no it's not pathetic to start a group for a story that is brilliant in every sense of the word, and which has more than 15 chapters!
    Things are warming up, can't wait for the next installment.
    Cecilia :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  We're starting to get to the fun part of the story for me too.  I'm looking forward to the next few chapters. 

    Thank you, too, for your kind words about "The Prince and the Seeker".  I started to wait on beginning the group because there's still just so much that will happen in SC, and I thought it might make more sense to wait til later when there might be more to talk about...but then I thought 'what the heck...go ahead and do it', lol.  

Title: Chapter 17 27 Jun 2008 7:33 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the way Snape is so human - like how he wants harry to stay and then feels guilty for wanting that.
    I didn't catch the reference to Jamie at first, until Snape explained - I think it's a good one and shows just how much more tolerant Snape has become and bold Harry has become.
    I love the efforts Snape's making to forging a friendship, but still realistically slow and awkward. Keep up the great work! (:
    Also - well done for working out the computer stuff! I'll take a dekko.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I love Severus, but close personal relationships are kind of new to him and I think he's floundering a little bit.  He's just wanting Harry to stay, but he knows that it's wrong to want to keep him a slave, so he feels ashamed.  It's actually not that he wants Harry to be a slave, but that he wants Harry to stay and he fears that Harry would leave if the slavery spell weren't forcing him to live with Severus now  (and Severus is probably right about that because I do think Harry would leave if he had the chance to right now.)

    Yep, they're still taking steps towards one another, but I think they've made a lot of progress.  And I was so proud of myself about figuring out the computer stuff, lol!

Title: Chapter 17 27 Jun 2008 3:38 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter, huzzah for Snape (Severus!) and Harry bonding xD

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 17 27 Jun 2008 6:57 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! The last part was just perfect having Harry call him Severus. I'm happy to see another new chapter and I certainly look forward to your next update as well! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it!  I always like it when Harry and Sev get on a first name basis, though I think Harry may have to force himself for a while still.

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