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Title: Miles to Go Before I Sleep 27 Feb 2008 6:24 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love that. It was completely beautiful. "Harry was his boy, too." I think I almost melted right there. I love that you wrote this from Hedwig's POV. It was absolutely perfect. I love Snape's characterization in this as well. And of course, Hedwig's. Really and truly, a wonderful piece. Thanks for sharing it.

    Author's Response: Aw, thanks!  I'm happy you enjoyed it.  I'm rather fond of that last line, myself.  :)
Title: Miles to Go Before I Sleep 27 Feb 2008 6:15 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Great one-shot!!! I really enjoyed reading it through Hedwig's eyes. Great narration and great characaterization for Hedwig. I liked how everything was colored by an owl's perspective, especially comparing Dudley to an egg that his parents didn't realized hatched already! LOL! Thank you for sharing this story. :)

    You had a couple of typos:

    The felt the tip of a wand against her body, and the shivering abated. (She felt?)

    When the cloak was pulled away, she was amazed to find herself in front of the boxy next... (nest)

    He was pocketed the glasses (pocketing)

    He placed the boy on a bed conjured a perch for her. (and conjured)

    Author's Response:

    Ah, thanks.  This was pretty rough draft-y.  I prefer to take more time and do a re-write, but if I waited any longer, then it would be too late for the "winter" part of  Winter Fic Fest!  I'll go back and fix the typos. 

     

    Glad you liked it!  Describing the Dursleys through Hedwig's eyes was fun. 

Title: Miles to Go Before I Sleep 27 Feb 2008 5:53 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a really nice story! I loved seeing everything from Hedwig's POV. It made the story much more interesting to read. I liked how she had a bit of an attitude at times too. Great job!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Hedwig turned out to have quite a mind of her own. 
Title: Miles to Go Before I Sleep 27 Feb 2008 4:27 pm
Reviewer: KatiePonse (Signed) [Report This]
    Everything about this story was absolutely beautiful. I had tears in my eyes reading some parts of it--truly amazing. Thank you for writing this!

    Author's Response:

    Wow, that's wonderful.  I'm happy to know that it touched you so much.  Thank you for reading & reviewing!

Title: Miles to Go Before I Sleep 27 Feb 2008 2:41 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a great story! I love how you write Hedwig's POV it makes the story so much more interesting and I love animal stories. I wrote one about Snape's dog and had it mostly from the dog's viewpoint.

    I like how you showed that the owl can have more than one master and it was sad that hers died. Plus the way she referred to the Dursleys-the pig man, the horse woman and the egg--hilarious, and I love how she recognizes Snape as a fellow guardian.

    Author's Response:

    Animal POVs are interesting to write.  If I hadn't written from that POV, I don't think I would have realized that Snape and Hedwig have something in common. 

Title: Miles to Go Before I Sleep 27 Feb 2008 10:31 am
Reviewer: rhiannon black (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ah, very nice, very, very nice. when work is as sweet as this, all is forgiven re not updating Never Say Remember

    Author's Response: I appreciate that.  :)  Thank you for the kind words.
Title: Miles to Go Before I Sleep 27 Feb 2008 9:53 am
Reviewer: bkerrmom1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!

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