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Reviews For Hide Yourself Away
Title: Remember When? 20 Mar 2008 2:18 pm
Reviewer: summergirl36 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG, I was ROFLMAO! I couldn't help it, that part with the bathtub, the wand, and James was sooo funny! I think I died! Wait...I'm back now!

    Author's Response: Aw, you're sweet!
Title: Past Imperfect 20 Mar 2008 2:16 pm
Reviewer: summergirl36 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor kid, he's got so much emotional baggage to deal with! I'm glad that he finally told someone though, he needed to. Wonderfully done!

    Author's Response: Yes, he does and thanks again!
Title: Safe Haven 20 Mar 2008 2:15 pm
Reviewer: summergirl36 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well that's a change from the usual story, but I like it. Aurelia seems really cool. Reading on!

    Author's Response: Great, I like doing new and unusual things!
Title: Done With It 20 Mar 2008 2:13 pm
Reviewer: summergirl36 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OOO, Snape's MAD! Look out! Then again, he has the right to be and I'm happy he told off the old man and stood up for his son!

    Author's Response: Me too, three cheers for Sev!
Title: Lily's Gift 20 Mar 2008 2:12 pm
Reviewer: summergirl36 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    aaww! I love the album and the captions, they were funny and sweet and beautifully written! Can't wait to see what Dumbledore tells Harry next!

    Author's Response: Thanks, this was one of my favorite parts to write!
Title: Harsh Truths 20 Mar 2008 2:00 am
Reviewer: summergirl36 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aw, this chapter almost made me cry. It must be awful for poor Harry to be without magic now and it was good of Sev to comfort him that way!

    Author's Response: Yes, Sev can be very compassionate and thanks for all your reviews!
Title: Shattered Magic 20 Mar 2008 1:59 am
Reviewer: summergirl36 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG! This soo terrible! Poor Harry! I feel so bad for him.

    Author's Response: I know, but sometimes it takes something catastrophic to reveal a hidden truth!  Don't worry, it'll get better!
Title: Rescued 20 Mar 2008 1:57 am
Reviewer: summergirl36 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, what an awesome chapter! I love how Severus rescues Harry and can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I hope you'll read some more!
Title: One Wild Night 19 Mar 2008 5:52 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great, fun chapter. I am not sure what Sev will do about this. Of course Harry didn't mean to drink but really, the kid should have left or called Sev, or whatever when he saw what was happening. Poor judgement, kid! Poor Harry. I hope Sev doesn't kill him. :oP

    Author's Response: I know, but Harry's never been the type to think things through, as we all know and that's how he ends up in trouble most of the time!  And given Sev's temper and how he feels about alcoholics . . .heaven help the poor kid! 
Title: One Wild Night 19 Mar 2008 4:44 pm
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Really great chapter! Poor, poor Harry! I don't think Severus will punish Harry without finding out the facts first - and poor little Harry is in no condition to tell him what happened. I think he would put the poor sick kid to bed first, then go to Neil's house to confront the parents and find out what happened. I wouldn't want to be Neil's parents or Mike when Severus gets ahold of them! The only mistake Harry made, was in staying at the house when the older boys broke the rules and staged the illegal party. But Harry is new to all this and wouldn't know what to do in this situation . . .he's never before had a parent or adult who cared what happened to him. I do think he and Severus need to have a long talk in the morning about how to handle peer pressure and what to do if this kind of thing happens again. My brothers and I were taught to walk away from any situation where our peers were involved in doing something we knew our parents wouldn't approve of. Harry should have gone home when Mike started the party. NO kid wants to be a tattler; but Harry could have gone home without telling on Mike. Severus needs to talk with him about all of this - not punish him. If he uncovers the true events of the night, I think he will realize Harry was a victim and didn't mean to do anything wrong.

    Author's Response: Yes, that's good advice and I think on some level Harry knew that's what he should have done, which is why when he was feeling sick, he tried to go home.  I think once Sev calms down, he'll realize that and will then discuss what Harry should have done in this situation, which was call him and tell him to come and get him.  Thanks for your review!

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