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Title: To Save A Life 15 Apr 2008 6:33 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the twist! Sev won't be pleased when he finds out Harry willingly went after Sirius Black. Poor boy's going to be grounded for ever!

    Author's Response: No he surely won't be, as you'll see in the next chapter! be prepared for some fireworks!
Title: To Save A Life 15 Apr 2008 5:50 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    Great rescue! Fudge is thick enough not to see thru it, but I'm a little surprised at Macnair... although of course, he wouldn't really give a damn about this chore as a swift animal beheading isn't really worth this time, as you made clear! ...

    Author's Response: Yes, Fudge is like his name . . .LOL! And MacNair, he's just waiting for the opportunity to kill some real people again, it's what he does best! 
Title: To Save A Life 15 Apr 2008 4:40 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    oh my goodness they're all going to get themselves killed. If they don't something tells me they're going to wish they had. Really looking forward to Harry meeting Sirius, and what's going to happen from there. Keep up the great work and please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response: Great and it just gets more and more rocky from here.  Those darn kids! Sev's going to have a coronary.
Title: To Save A Life 15 Apr 2008 3:37 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    nice nice WEll wrtitten. Love it and keep it up.

    Author's Response: Thanks and glad you're enjoying it!
Title: To Save A Life 15 Apr 2008 1:44 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Go hermione! Go everyone for that matter! Yay for saving Beaky and the discussion beforehand was hilarious! I loved this part and can't wait to see what's going to happen now!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm gla dyou like how it was done and the kids stories, I had fun writing this part too!
Title: To Save A Life 15 Apr 2008 1:42 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Woohoo! Buckbeak lives! Yay! I loved the way you handled it, with Aria in her cougar form and Harry in with hagrid and having him ASK Severus this time, so he can't get in trouble for that part at least, shows he's got SOME sense. I also loved the part with the kids plotting & Hermione's story with the chemistry set--sounds like something one of my kids would do!

    Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Ha, I'm glad I wasn't the only one with crazy siblings or whatever in my family--Hermione's incident is based upon something that really happened to my nephew. Kids!  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: An Unfortunate Discovery 15 Apr 2008 1:12 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    damn that draco! what the hell was he thinking! can't wait for the next chapter!

    yay! 100 points to slytherin! and i also get a chocolate frog! yipee!

    Author's Response: He was thinking how he wants revenge on Aria, the little creep . . .but he's gonna get more than he bargained for believe me!
Title: An Unfortunate Discovery 14 Apr 2008 9:26 pm
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry he's not going to have a pleasant rest of term. I completely agree with Severus' punishment, Harry desevered every word and everything he got. I liked that Severus told him excatly what he was going to get, and didn't deter from it.
    I absolutely loved Severus when he was sick he's so funny and completely stubborn. It's also nice to see somebody else getting yelled at and Madam Pomfrey does such an excellent job of it.
    Draco is going to land himself in a world of trouble if something happens to Mooney and somebody gets hurt because of it. It'll be intresting to see how Harry and his friends decide to save Buckbeak, especially since Harry is still grounded and has completely lost his Dad's trust. Doing something that stupid so soon after being yelled at, isn't going to sit well with our favorite potion's master. Totally can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. Keep up the great work and please please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response: Yes, Sev's very good at keeping his word, as we all know.  That's one of the things that makes him such a good dad.  I loved writing the sick Severus and Poppy part, it was a hoot.  Draco is in for a very rude awakening sometime soon and I'll be posting the Buckbeak chapter soon--say in about fifteen minutes, as well as a new chapter for Never Again!  I was up late last night writing and will be doing the same again tonight because I'm off tomorrow!  Enjoy and thanks for the awesone updates!
Title: An Unfortunate Discovery 14 Apr 2008 7:06 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    omg evil draco!!!! you really are the lord of naughty plot twists.

    Author's Response: Aren't I just though! *smirks slyly*
Title: An Unfortunate Discovery 14 Apr 2008 5:38 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I think the ban on his broom definitely hurt Harry more than his spanking. Poor Kid. lol. But he *did* deserve it.

    I liked how you focused on Harry's fear of losing Severus's trust. And then you reiterated that small theme at the end by having Severus ask "Can I count on you to do that?" when speaking of delivering the Wolfsbane potion. Good job ;)

    Author's Response: You're absolutely right, and I'm glad you picked up on it!  I wasn't sure if anyone would.  And the trust thing is a big deal to Harry, since he wants Severus to be proud of him. 

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