Potions and Snitches
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Title: An Unfortunate Discovery 14 Apr 2008 12:50 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great job! Harry's punishment was fair, he knew he shouldn't of gone into Hogsmeade and chose to disobey anyhow, so he deserved everything his dad dished out.
    Poor Sev, to get sick like that and then get lectured by Poppy (ha!) and that Draco...somebosy should spank HIM!

    Author's Response: I agree and maybe someone will spank that nasty little sneak . . .someday! 
Title: An Unfortunate Discovery 14 Apr 2008 12:47 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Read this last night & forgot to post a review. Whoops!
    Anyway, great job here and I think Sev did a good job of disciplining Harry--if my son had pulled that kind of stunt, he'd of been grounded and smacked too. The kid knows better. Loved the scenes with the sick Severus, they cracked me up! Brilliant!

    Author's Response: Thank you and I'm gla dyou came back and posted one, i really appreciate it!
Title: An Unfortunate Discovery 13 Apr 2008 9:13 pm
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    yay!!! Its really good. Meh..snape is sick. whaa thats sad. But keep it up.

    Author's Response: Thanks and yes, poor Severus! But even inodmitable Potions Masters get sick sometimes. .. and drive everyone crazy!
Title: An Unfortunate Discovery 13 Apr 2008 7:18 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! If I were in his shoes, I would've rather had Remus's punishment than Snape's - it just goes on forever.

    And poor Remus. I can only imagine what chaos is about to ensue. ;-)

    Author's Response: Chaos indeed, just wait!  But Draco will get his, don't worry!  And you're right, Severus is one hell of a disciplinarian.
Title: An Unfortunate Discovery 13 Apr 2008 4:31 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Never, never leave medicine unattended. That is the first lesson of the day. The second lesson is that healers and men make the worst patients.

    I think that Harry's punishment was spot on. If you act like a child then you get treated like a child.

    Author's Response: Yes, you never should do that.  But these are kids who don't know anything, although Remus should've come out and drank the potion right away.  God yes, to the second one--I have a doctor sister and she is awful when she's sick and so are my father and brother.  Glad you agreed with Severus's punishment, I was worried it might be a little harsh.
Title: An Unfortunate Discovery 13 Apr 2008 8:50 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Stupid stupid stupid boy. And this time I am referring to Draco Malfoy. That arrogant boy could seriously hurt Remus if that juice has a bad reaction to those ingredients. *sigh*

    Author's Response: You're right, but then this is Draco, who could care less if Remus up and croaks because of him--evil little snot!  But what goes around comes around, and he'll get his at the end! 
Title: An Unfortunate Discovery 13 Apr 2008 8:26 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'll be posting a new one shortly!
Title: Caught! 13 Apr 2008 4:45 am
Reviewer: Silent_Soliloquy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter--wonderful suspense. That deadly soft voice of a parent always bodes ill for the child. *shudders in remembrance* I sure as hell don't envy Harry right now, I tell you that right now. I look forward to your next chapter--hopefully this will drive the point home to Harry. There's nothin' like a seriously stingin' backside plus grounding to help--I can tell you that personally. *grins* I am thinking with hope, he won't try to lie his way out of it?

    Author's Response: No, he won't lie, he KNOWS what that would get him and he's hoping that Severus will be merciful . . .a little!  And yes, you're right about the voice . . .it was when they weren't screaming at you that you KNEW you were dead and nothing except God was gonna save you.  As Harry will learn much to his sorrow!
Title: Caught! 13 Apr 2008 3:53 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Dum De Dum Dum! I can just hear the music now . . .Sev's going to nail Harry's butt to a wall. And well he should! Please up date soon! Love it!

    Author's Response: Yes and doesn't it sound frightening? Poor Harry!  Oh well, he does deserve it!
Title: Caught! 13 Apr 2008 3:51 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    ooh boy, harry's gonna be one sorry boy when his dad gets through with him! Loved the way you had Remus scold him too and Aria also, those kids need to be reined in in a big way! Hurry and write the next one--I can't wait!

    Author's Response: I will and thank you for the review!

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