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Title: Just Like My Dad 28 Apr 2008 3:40 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    For a minute there I thought it someone wanting to kill Severus or hurt Harry.

    Author's Response: You and a lot of others! *smirks* I'm glad it was Tobias, weren't you?
Title: The Worst Punishment Ever 28 Apr 2008 12:40 am
Reviewer: brenda wood (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I cannot log in and this is frustrating as I have to enter this code thing and if its wrong I have to review all over again

    Love it - think sev was fair

    Author's Response:

    yeah, I know, sometimes the code thing is enough to drive you to drink! 

    Thanks as always for revewing Bren! 

Title: Just Like My Dad 27 Apr 2008 12:25 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww, and I was so sure it was Lucius trailing them, wanting to follow them home. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Little Sun

    Author's Response: No Lucius was not following them, only poor lonely Tobias.  But Lucius will make a repeat appearance towards the end of the book, so be warned! 
Title: Just Like My Dad 27 Apr 2008 8:46 am
Reviewer: Molly (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think this one is the sweetest chapter yet. Harry's so cute wanting to be just like Snape. He's the most adorable child and I love to see him having people who care about him. I do feel that you're a little out of character with Snape sometimes, but I still love the story. And thanks for updating so often. It's great getting to constantly read new chapters from this lovely story. Well done! =)

    Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much! I love writing Harry as  a little kid, he's really fun to put in different situations.  As for Sev OOC-ness, I know he's not the typical snarky Potions professor we all know and loved, but this is AU and he never had to become a spy here, since Voldy died forever in the first war, and in this universe he was actually friends with James, Sirius, and Remus and Lily too, of course! So if he seems a lot nicer and more mellow, well that's what having good friends and a profession you enjoy does to you.  Of course, he does still have a strict sarcastic side, but it only relaly show when he deals with Tobias.  And he loves Harry to pieces here, who wouldn't?  Glad you're enjoying this!
Title: Just Like My Dad 27 Apr 2008 7:48 am
Reviewer: Kyleigh (Couldn't bother to sign in) (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Heya!

    Great chapter.

    You had me thinking...Lucius - ruddy - Malfoy is going to kidnap Harry! Goodness... noticed you had planted that in my head right at the beginning with anti - kidnapping spell etc... *Evil Author!*

    Look forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    ha! I seem to have caught a lot of people with my little unintended joke.  Honsetly, I never thought people would think it was Malfoy until I read my reviews, I just didn't want to give away the fact that it was Tobias until the end of the chapter.  Maybe I AM evil!  Just a little.

    Thanks for reviewing and I've updated!

Title: The Worst Punishment Ever 27 Apr 2008 3:40 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think Sev's punishment was fair, after all Harry knew he'd done wrong and so deserved it! However, I'm glad that Harry and Sev have now forgiven each other and can move on. Anxiously awaiting the next one!

    Author's Response: Thank you! it's always a relief when your parent forgives you for whatever you've done.  I'm working on the next chapter now!
Title: The Worst Punishment Ever 27 Apr 2008 3:35 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, that ending was so sweet! I loved the line where Harry asks Sev if he's still mad at him! It's so typical of little kids at that age, they need constant reassurance that you love them! Great job and can't wait for the next one!

    Author's Response: Yes, they surely do and I'm working hard on the next one!
Title: Never Again 27 Apr 2008 1:54 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww, he has got it now. Should have known better in the pub!

    Author's Response: Yes, he has indeed, but maybe now he'll know better!
Title: Like Father Like Son 27 Apr 2008 12:23 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like the way you change Tobias and how your change his own thinking about himself, er, his perception of his own past, I mean. Little Sun

    Author's Response: Thank you very much, I really wanted to do something different here!  And Tobias is an interesting character to experiment with.
Title: Wake Up, Daddy! 26 Apr 2008 11:53 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting, really. Very promising, too. Little Sun

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Hope you enjoy the rest of it!

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