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Reviews For Never Again!
Poor Harry glad to see that he was alright after being chased by that crazy dog. Harry's reaction to Severus being awake was priceless. I loved how you showed how impatient Harry was for Severus to get better, because he wanted him back, it really shows his young age. It's amazing how a man can wake up from a 3 month coma, and go right back into parent mode without even a blink of a eye. Great job with that, really awesome chapter. LES Author's Response: I HAD wondered where you'd gone--since you're one of my very frequent reviewers! And yes, it is hard for kids to understand why it takes so long for a parent to heal from something. And well once a father always a father, and Sev is a good one, though he does make mistakes.
I love this story, so please don't leave me waiting too long to find out what happens to dear Harry. (I don't even know why I say that, you're like the fastest updater on here.) -Elise Author's Response: Thanks Elise and you won't be waiting too long, I should have the next chapte rp[osted by tonight say nine or ten o'clock maybe, so check back then.
Author's Response: You're right and unfortunately that's life, sometimes it does intrude on plans, although Sev never said he wouldn't take Harry to the park, he just had to wait until he was done talking.
Seeruk Author's Response: Ouch! I don't know if Sev will go that far however there will definitely be consequences.
Author's Response: You're right and there will be a discussion about that before Sev punishes him, but Harry also knows better than to go in there, and has been told repeatedly never to do so. Thanks for reviewing.
Author's Response: Yes, he is indeed!
Author's Response: Yes, indeed, for the important thing to remember here is that Harry did indeed know what he was doing was not permitted, since he'd been told repeatedly not to go in there, and did it anyway on spite.
Probably give him The Time-Out to End All Time-Outs. And the little snot would deserve it. :-P But seriously, why wasn't Sev's Lab locked? Or had an alarm set on it, in case any 6-year-olds decided to make free with the ingredients? For someone as safety conscious as Sev is about his son, not having locks or magic alarms doesn't make any sense to me, so the trouble Harry gets into didn't seem likely to me. I suggest have him get mixed up in cooking in the kitchen. Plenty of messes (occasionally dangerous ones) to get into there, without breaking this reader's suspension of disbelief. Author's Response: Normally, his lab is locked, so you'll see why it wasn't, and he was never intending to be that long speaking to Matthew, it just happened, but your idea was a good one too, it simply didn't occur to me.
Poor Harry. He deserves whatever punishment Sev decides on. Hmmm...If I'm not mistaken according to Sev's rules putting yourself in danger warrents a spanking? Poor kid...but it will be deserved. Excellent chapter! As always. Can't wait for the next. Author's Response: I type very quickly and I keep a notepad on me so I can scribble down ideas when I'm away from my computer. I write a lot at night after I'm done with all the usual things, dinner, helping my mom, I live with her since she has Parkinson's and need someone to be with her all the time and dad can't manage, he's got a really bad back, and rather than pay someone . . .Anyway, you're right about part of Harry's punishment, the other part will be a surprise.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! :) |
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