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Reviews For Never Again!
Author's Response: Yes, I know what you mean.
Great story Author's Response: Thanks and Sev should be waking up in, oh, another three chapters, at least that's how I have it planned.
next chapter sounds very interesting; I'm looking forward to it. One comment on this chapter: why would Harry be praying to God? Not only was Snape never portrayed as religious in canon, but Wizards aren't Christian as a rule and I certainly can't see Harry's dad picking up any religion from Tobias :) Author's Response: Thanks and actually, in canon, I found Draco exclaiming "God, Potter you're so stupid!" a few times, and JK never said that wizards don't believe in God, they celebrate Christmas and Easter, which are religious holidays. As for Sev, Tobias wasn't his only influence, he also had his mother and Dumbledore, both of whom would have stressed the idea of a loving forgiving God to him, at least in my opinion, to balance out the abuse he suffered at Tobias's hands. Anyhow, religion isn't really the main focus of this story.
Author's Response: Me too, though it won't be for a few chapters yet!
Author's Response: Thank you and I'm writing away! LOL!
Author's Response: Oh, Tobias won't kill him, he's not quite that bad, but he's a strict bastard all the same and he doesn't know how to treat a kid nicely, since he spent nearly all of Sev's childhood drunk and in a temper. So be prepared for some major blunders and tears, just warning you!
Anyway, I can see this version of Tobias as a very strict grandfather who sees nothing wrong in doling out a spanking with a belt. He would think it's just good discipline, especially since he's providing Harry with his other essential needs: food, a place to sleep, etc. I do feel terribly sorry for Harry already, and I hope that Severus gets well soon, too! Great beginning few chapters to this story. I'm loving it so far :) Author's Response: Yes, and so do I, which is why I don't do that in mine. There will be a couple of instances when he smacks Harry and one or two spankings, but one will be sort of deserved and the other . . .well I won't spoil the story for you. I've also updated my other story, btw, so you can check out the adventure with Buckbeak, it's pretty funny and serious all at the same time.
great chapter and I can't wait for the next. Did I mention how thrilled I was that someone answered my challenge? Author's Response: You did and I'm glad you're liking this so far!
You update fast! Author's Response: Thanks, I just finished this one last night!
Also, please don't leave Severus in a coma for to long. a month or two or maybe three, but please not a year. Great chapter and I'm eagerily awaiting the next one! Author's Response: I won't leave Severus in a coma for a year, he isn't as badly hurt as all that. I was thinking maybe three months, but no longer than six. Glad you're enjoying this! I've also updated my other story tonight as well! |
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