| Title: Chapter 20: Either, Or
| 29 Aug 2008 8:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Zarathustra (Anonymous)
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Awesome - and I return the speechless favor.
Mercy, woman, you know how to hit our agony buttons. The trial was great (if a mockery). I don't know what Bella is going to do, but it isn't going to be good.
Sirius and Harry need some quiet time to talk.
| Title: Chapter 20: Either, Or
| 29 Aug 2008 6:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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again another good chapter written, I anxiously await the next chapter, please continue !
| Title: Chapter 20: Either, Or
| 29 Aug 2008 5:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oy, you did it again!! You left us on eggshells! Brilliant brilliant; did I say brilliant?
Did Severus, in his haste to whisk Harry away from danger, leave poor Ginny to Wormtails filthy paws? Harry will never forgive him if something happens to Ginny!
Ok girl, you do realize that you now have to get the NEXT chapter out ASAP!!!! My heart's beating a mile a minute in anxiety and anticipation!!
BTW, I like my namesake, even though she seems a little bit of a flake!!! ;)
| Title: Chapter 20: Either, Or
| 29 Aug 2008 10:26 am
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| Reviewer: fluff (Signed)
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My goodness another chapter already, your fingers must be sore!
So much going on, hard to comment on everything. Very chilling scene at the end and noooooooo a cliffie!! Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
| Title: Chapter 19: Impact
| 28 Aug 2008 3:59 am
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| Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous)
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Very sweet chapter. I hope Harry and Sirius make things right soon.
Great Chapter! Your really had them work through a lot of issues and made Harry realize that it's ok to be angry!
| Title: Chapter 18: Quaffle: Part II
| 27 Aug 2008 8:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed)
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Wonderful Chapter! I love how it played out with Poppy talking to Sev. Then the fight and Harry needed to lose control and see that he was loved great chapter!
Nice work! I'm looking forward to more!
I don't know what I can say that others haven't already said, Tabitha, but I do love the interaction between Harry and Severus, even though they're experiencing some growing pains for sure.
Severus really needs a jolt of self-confidence here, and the ability to forgive himself. I admit though that that is a tough one. How can a loving father ever completely forgive himself when he knows that he's hurt his child so badly and for so long? But he's got to try because he is continuing to hurt Harry, who needs him to be strong and secure and for them to be able to move past all that.
Their awkwardness with one another after the confrontation was good, and I loved how Remus was there for the both of them. (I especially loved how Severus was afraid Remus was going to hug him...too funny! And now, of course, I really want a scene where they do hug, lol). The chapter did seem to end on a more hopeful note, with Harry being determined to help his dad and Severus being determined to give his son what he needs. I can't wait to see where they end up going.
Oh, I'm happy that Harry and Ginny got everything straightened out, too.
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