| Title: Chapter 18: Quaffle: Part II
| 21 Aug 2008 4:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Crystal (Anonymous)
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thank you thank you thank you for adding another chapter, I love your story, it is funny in some places and so sad in others, I am so glad you continued with it, Lily's charm is deffinately one of the best if not the best fan fic online, congrats on such wonderful work
Author's Response: Wow, thanks Crystal. What a nice compliment. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and that you liked the chapter. I enjoy the humor and the sadness and mixing them together. Thanks so much for the review. :o)
| Title: Chapter 18: Quaffle: Part II
| 21 Aug 2008 3:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh wow!! Finally Sirius realizes the extent of Severus' love for Harry and vice versa!
I'm drained emotionally reading this; I feel their pain. I really hope that Sirius and Harry can reconcile, then Harry will be surrounded by all the love he deserves. I have a feeling though, that it is going to be a rocky road till it reaches that point.
Again, you have made the wait for an update worthwhile; hope there is another one soon!
| Title: Chapter 18: Quaffle: Part II
| 21 Aug 2008 9:32 am
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| Reviewer: fluff (Signed)
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Well thats my angst sponge well and truly soaked! You really do write emotions amazingly well. You managed to make me feel alternatively sorry for Harry, Sev and Sirius and even Remus for having got caught in the middle. But at least Sirius is seeing that Sev does care about Harry, he just needs to realise that he can still be a part of Harry's life. As aways leaves you wanting more....
| Title: Chapter 18: Quaffle: Part II
| 21 Aug 2008 7:10 am
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| Reviewer: Solitare (Signed)
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wonderful chapter, hope you update soon, this is such a good story! Skittles to you
| Title: Chapter 18: Quaffle: Part II
| 21 Aug 2008 5:53 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Wow. Absolutely fantastic chapter. That was...amazing, wonderful, awesome, incredible, everything. The emotions were so intense and descriptive you could actually feel them. Your best chapter yet. Absolutely brilliant.
| Title: Chapter 6: Deflation
| 18 Aug 2008 6:26 am
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| Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous)
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I love the new changes you made to the chapter, it was a very good one to start out with, and somehow you've made it even better. Great Job!
Author's Response: Thanks Ashley! It was fun to fiddle with it. :o)
Interesting chapter title. It's quite amusing how Pomfrey scolds Severus for not taking the entire sleeping potion, as if he were still one of the students. (Are you assuming Pomfrey was on staff when Severus was in school?) This is not the first time Severus has resisted sleeping when he needed it. Is the reader supposed to understand why he does this? I can speculate, but I've been wrong before.
Is Sirius goal-oriented here, deliberately trying to undercut Harry's relationship with his father? Or is he merely venting his anger and confusion? Sirius says, “If I hadn’t known that was Snape, I would have said without a doubt that he loved you in those memories.” Does he believe Severus did not even love Harry as a baby, before Lily's lie?
Author's Response: Yes, I'm assuming Poppy was on staff when Severus was a student. She has actually scolded him quite a few times in this fic. :oP As for Severus not sleeping, he does explain himself early on about having nightmares and not wanting to sleep. Hence the Nightmare squelching potion. And this time, he didn't want to sleep, because he's been so rattled by almost losing Harry multiple times that he just doesn't want to sleep so he can make sure Harry is all right. He's having a some symptoms of post traumatic stress. Well since it's from Harry's POV, you have to speculate a bit. I do that on purpose. :oP Sirius is venting his frustration and anger. He is wondering the same thing everybody was wondering when they first found out Snape was Harry's father. It is natural for him to do so. And no, he doesn't believe right now that Severus really would or could have loved Harry. Sirius thinks Severus is a bad person. Using Lily and turning Regulus to the "dark side". He doesn't trust him, and last he heard, he hated Harry. And Harry hated him. So, no this is not on purpose. He is confused and angry. He is not handling it well at all. Thanks for the review.
Wow! I love how protective Sev is of Harry He just loves him so much. And Sirius, Lord he is a PITA! He needs to get over himself!
Oh baby! Snape is getting ready to snap! Strong chapter! Sirius is causing such harm while he tries to get it together. And Remus! I hope it works out with Tonks! Oh boy this is all intense! Good chapter! Please keep updating!
| Title: Chapter 17: Quaffle
| 11 Aug 2008 12:00 pm
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| Reviewer: fluff (Signed)
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Ok who will crack first? Poor Harry, Sirius needs to learn tact, Harry needs to not take everything to heart and well Severus, well I think he is doing well not to combust! Nice amount of angst, so glad that you feel better. Hope to read more soon.
Author's Response: LOL It's a sad day when Severus is the one who's the most controlled. :oP But yep, it's true. Sirius definitely needs to figure out a better way to deal with this. Harry is pretty fragile right now. He hasn't even begun to deal with all that's happened to him. Glad you enjoyed the angst. That chapter was definitely fun. :o)
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