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Reviews For Lily's Charm: The Gift
So now we know where Harry gets his mother hen instincts from when James tries taking care of Severus upon his return. And I loved the scene of Lily, Severus and baby Harry. My muse is going nuts with that image. Who didn't love how Severus outstepped Scrimgeour at every turn, and his witty retort to Remus. I love that guy....love, love, love. And Harry's big head. Well, I commented on that to you personally and I'm in the camp of "what the heck is wrong with Harry that is head is getting so big?" Voldy's done something to him...I just feel it in my bones. I'm waiting on Ginny to start hexing the girls surrounding Harry and fawning all over him. I wouldn't make a redhead mad. Nope.... Poor Remus. He certainly didn't deserve that from Harry. Is there going to be a talk between him and Severus about this? I slump to the ground at your feet and beg your forgiveness over the short review. My muses are screaming at me over a certain image that I mentioned previously. Remus gets the hug. He needs it after that class, poor guy. Author's Response: That's all right. Slack-cutting, remember? ;o) I love emotions since I am a Hufflepuff, you know. Glad you enjoy my roller coasters. You go get started on that lovely artwork. My muses may need it later. I love Severus as well. Adore him. Yes, I do. Especially playing off Remus. Adore them both. But you know that already, don't you. ;o) Harry's head is uncharacteristically large, isn't it? hmmm. It does make you wonder, I suppose. Ginny is up next as is a talk between a certain big-headed adolescent and his dad. You know, it's a very good thing Severus doesn't hate Remus anymore. LOL And yeah, Poor Remus indeed. He does need a hug. Maybe a brown-haired Tonks will be there to give him one... YAY!
Author's Response: Thanks Waterleaves! I'm so glad you liked it, even with Harry's big ole head. And I am thinking most people are pretty annoyed with Harry right about now...or soon at least. LOL Thanks for the review! :o)
I do love these moments between Sev and James (and Lily and Harry too!) from back in the day. They're sad and sweet and I just want to grab everyone into a great big hug after reading it. Poor Sev. (It was funny that he was sprayed with pepper spray though!) And poor James for wanting to help but being unable to do anything. Poor Lily too, for needing to worry endlessly after her husband and his fate. And poor baby Harry, he's so adorable, snotty-nosed and all, curled up on Daddy's shoulder. Aww... I must say that the most hilarious moments of this chapter were when Harry, Sev, and Dumbles were in the Headmaster's office with Scrimgeour. Loved it! But I'm nervous about Harry testifying about Lucius...I have a feeling that if Harry's the main reason Luci's let free that the horrid man won't care and continue to do what is convenient for him (probably being a DE) and make Draco do something horrid to Harry in turn. By the way, will we get to see our favorite pansy of a boy blond Slytherin soon? I kinda miss him. I do wonder too, what his (and all the other Slytherins) opinion is about Harry and his defeating Voldie (with Sev doing most of the work, that is). Oohh...Luna would be a great point of view to bring in here too...I can just imagine her scoffing at all the girls fawning over Harry, making some comment or another. Love Luna. Bring back those blonds!! Please. I agree with everyone who's said (and if you haven't said it yet, you're thinking it) that Harry needs to be brought back to earth. His ego is defiantly swollen...and it's a shame. I believe that Sev'll have him back to his proper place soon enough, if Hermione, Ginny and Ron don't do it first. And kudos to Remus for trying. I feel sorry for that werewolf. *sigh* But then again...Sev is calling Remus, Remus now!! Yay! I almost though that it would never happen! *giggles* I'm still feeling apprehensive about this dinner, but if all the Weasleys, Neville (and I assume Hermione) get to come along; along with Remus and Dora, it shouldn't be that bad...right? I'm nervous again...rats! Because what if Harry does act like a prat?! That'll suck, and probably happen, with the way things are going so far. Tone it down a bit, Harry!! And I'm curious to see what Scrimgeour's real reasons are behind wanting to make a memorial at Godric's Hollow. That man's too slippery for his own good. Question: What was Sev referring to when he asked Harry if he wanted to discuss Christmas? Did that come up somehow within their meeting with Scrimgeour? Ok, I'm done, and need to get some more studying in...I'm reaching towards the end! But, you're not, right? You've still got lots and lots of chapters to write for LC, and once The Gift is done (which won't be for another couple years) you can write some more Remus/Dora shorts as well as a prequel with Sev and James...and then you can work on that Pre-Hogwarts fic. See? You've got plenty more to do, and keep up the good work! These chapters are defiantly the best part of my day! Thanks for updating so soon!! Until next chapter! Author's Response: Oh, PK! YAY. I'm so glad you liked it! But before I go any further, I have to admit, that I am not a huge Luna fan. I don't think we'll see her here. Sorry. Glad you like the flashbacks. They are some of my favorite bits. Draco is up next chapter in Potions class with Harry and you'll just have to wait and see about old Lucius, but there isn't much hope of him becoming a Death Eater again. He loves himself too much to make the same mistake twice. I don't think he realized the first time how degrading it would be to a minion of the Dark Lord. :oP Harry does need to be brought back to earth and just why ON earth is acting like a total prat? Just the praise of his peers or something more insidious? Hmmm Sev did call him Remus, but he sorta had to there. Didn't want to back down from a challenge. LOL Poor Remus though. Harry was pretty mean. *sigh* The banquet is up next as well. YAY Scrimgeour. As per usual, you'll just have to wait and see. Sev had mentioned Christmas earlier in the chapter and Harry got all quiet because he was thinking of Sirius. Sev didn't press the issue b/c Dumbles was there. I do have lots to do. LOL I had to chuckle at your list though. Hee hee. I could probably do a Remus/Tonks short now with Remus all bummed by Harry's rudeness. Awww, poor Remus. He needs a hug. Glad you liked the chapter and you're on the downward sprint for finals, right? Good luck and you are very welcome. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thank you. :o) I'm so glad you liked it.
The scene where Severus was describing the tortured family and the child's blood made me tear up. And the line about Severus trying to appear apathetic but James seeing right through that was heart-wrenching. I can't even imagine some of the things canon Snape must have had to go through as a Death Eater. *shivers* I loved the fact that Harry was a moody teenager in this chapter. It keeps him real. Remus was absolutely in the right when he reprimanded Harry for calling him by his first name. I always want to flick my students in the head when they try to address me by my LAST name only. LOL. I think I actually did that once, now that I think about... Harry's embarassment and anger was described very well, along with the small attitude he had with Severus. I loved Severus' line: "I apologize for being 'tetchy'..." (Said with humor). So well done. Terrific chapter! You're definitely still going strong on this one... Keep writing! Author's Response: LOL You're review was just wonderful. Thanks. Your favorite chapter, eh? :o) I really, really enjoy writing Severus and James. I should just write a whole prequel with them. I adore them. Yeah, yeah....as if I don't have enough to do, right? :oP Harry was pretty moody, wasn't he? I get really tired of him being perfect all the time. He can't be a paragon, every day. Poor Remus. I don't think he even would have said anything about Harry calling Remus, if Harry hadn't already been arguing with a 'tude. That's funny that your students call you by your last name. hee hee. Well, at least Sev can get Harry to snap out of his attitude. Too bad Remus didn't have the same luck. And I suppose, good thing that Sev is sorta friends with Remus now. ;o) Glad you enjoyed Sev's light humor. Humor works better with Harry than more tude-ness, I suppose. Thanks, Jade. You are awesome. Let me know how today goes! :o)
Author's Response: ROFL. Yep. he sure does. Give him a day or two. Or actually, give Sev a day or two.... *ominously...*
Scrimgeour reminds me of a slick politican, like Bill Clinton, sort of. Wants a figurehead and Harry's the one. Good thing Harry has his father looking out for him. And is Draco under suspicion too for his part in things? Author's Response: Nobody knows about Draco, except Harry and Co. They just know that Tonks pretended to be him. And yep, good thing for Sev. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I know all about busy weeks. I feel like I never get to do any reading as all my free time is taken up with writing. LOL Sirius, I think, has good reason to feel that way about Slytherin. His family, the Slytherins he's known the best are Slytherins and I think, it really hurt him when his brother went to Voldemort. But you're right. Sirius and Severus are very much alike in some ways. Thanks for the review. :o)
wonderful story, i cant praise it more than that and i love all the characters and because i am such a big h/g fan, i adore your moments between harry, ginny and severus... i hope to find more of them and i will proper review when i have a bit more time... it is wonderfull! Author's Response: Oh, YAY! I'm so glad you came over here and find LC! (LolaPotter?) :oD I really have wanted to tell the readers at hpff that LC is over here and on ff.net all finished, but I don't think the hpff mods would appreciate it. LOL That site drives me crazy with how slow it is. Anyway, I am so happy you enjoyed the rest of LC and that you are reading the sequel now as well. I'm so happy you like the characters in the story and I love Harry and Ginny as well. Don't worry, Ginny will be around a lot this story. And Severus still has a certain charm to teach Harry and perhaps Ginny. :oP Thanks so much for the review and letting me know you found LC over here. YAY!!!
Actually, I've got a question to start you off; who are you referring to with this title and tagline? I'm guessing it's Sev with his determination to return to Tillwood and risk his life to save some Muggles. Or is it James and the way he stood up for Sev, while attempting to console his friends? But that flashback was everything it could be, and it was written beautifully! I am really quite interested in Jade's story now, and may just read it this week, although I'm not really convinced that Siri could be a good father figure...to a teenager, at least. *shrugs* But this was AMAZING!!! You are so good at describing emotions, and especially emotional turmoil. Harry and Sev's walk to the Great Hall kept me in line with their feelings as they were walking through the corridors. And I love you for that! Their emotions are always quite raw and so heart felt that its amazing they can slip into their easy banter every once and a while...which I also adore! Oh, and Sev's subtle diversions were particularly enjoyable...and Harry's getting the hang of it too, I see. I too loved Poppy here, she's just so cool! And also with the other professors 'congratulating' Sev and wishing him and Harry well as he walked to his seat was nice, that *they* realized, understood, and supported his role in the defeat of Voldie was great. And so was Remus. Love that werewolf!! *giggles* Harry Snape... *giggles* I am glad that Rita is gone. Do we get to find out what Sev did to her, by chance? And I agree with cathyrf, this Hero Dinner doesn't sound like a good idea. Not a good idea at all... Well, I think that's all I've got. This was an amazing chapter but I'm anxious for when the hateful/bad attention starts. Hopefully not for awhile...right? And Remus and Tonks wedding is coming up soon...*giddiness takes over* Can't wait!!! Have a great weekend, OE and work on that next chapter! I'm defiantly going to need something to do during a study break!! Author's Response: Ah, the Hero title refers to so many things. Severus for Tillwood and the good person he is, James for doing what he did for the Snapes, and Harry, though for him that title is more a not quite as serious thing. And for the way Scrimgeour, rather unwilling calls him hero at the end of the chapter. Well, see, that's why I adore Jade's story so much. Her Sirius is not the typical Sirius as a reckless crazy person who lets Harry run amock. I know that's maybe what we surmise from the books, but after seeing Gary and Dan interacting in movie 3, I really think, given how much Sirius loves Harry, that he would make a wonderful father figure to him. They would have issues at first, as they settle into the roles, but I think because Sirius wants what's best for Harry, he would have to take on a new role as parent, instead of simply friend. And that's what Jade's story is about. Everybody has to grow up sometime, even Sirius. And as Jade pointed out in her review...it was Sirius following James' lead as a tormentor of Snape. ANd if James can grow up, so can Sirius when given a reason to. And she gives such depth and background to Sirius and that's what I am using here. His pain at his family's disowning him, especially his brother. And his soft, gentler side. Sirius wasn't like that in the movies, except when he was talking to Harry. You could just see the love betweeen them. Can you see how much I love Sirius? LOL Anyway, I"m glad you liked the flashback. It was really fun to write. Thanks, PK! I'm glad you enjoy the emotions in this. I love their banter as well. It feels so natural for them. Poppy is amazing, it's true. And yep, Severus has a very nice support system, even if he doesn't realize it. YAY for Harry Snape! LOL Yep, we'll find out all about Skeeter-kins. Sometimes the simplest solution is best. ;o) You'll have to wait and see about the Hero's dinner. Hm...we'll see some bad attention up next. But not from where you think and it won't be too egregious yet. Remus and Tonks...hmmmm...you'll just have to wait and see. Are your finals over next week? I hope so. They must be killing you. Good luck! And thanks for the review. :o)
I like your Scrimgeour too -- we need a new villain (not evil, just kind of wicked) now that Voldemort is gone and Snape is a good guy. Author's Response: Thanks. I think with all they've been through...they've bonded pretty solidly. It's hard to share someone's very soul and not bond, I suppose. Scrimgeour is decidedly wicked. But don't worry about having a villain. Evil still permeates their lives. *waggles eybrows* Don't you just love Snape as a good guy? I do. |
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