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Title: An Appropriate Punishment 07 Jun 2008 1:16 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow. i hate flash backs like that...

    there terrible!

    now on to the next one!

    Author's Response: Yes, they are, for everyone! 
Title: Just the Way You Are 07 Jun 2008 1:04 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    oh wow! i have tears in my eyes! that was so beautiful! wow!

    I love that you included the phantom of the opera...it is my favorite play! i can't get enough of it!

    oh boy, i don't want to be in harry's shoes...

    on to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: It's mine too, I've seen it 3 times!  Yeah, it's a keeper!  I used to write romance before I wrote fanfiction, can you tell?  And poor Harry, he's really in for it!
Title: The Bedtime Prank 07 Jun 2008 12:44 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    it won't be pretty when severus gets home!

    on to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Nope, it won't all!
Title: A Stranger Is Watching 06 Jun 2008 11:24 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    mean cliff hanger!

    Author's Response: I know, I'm evil! *chuckles*
Title: Just the Way You Are 06 Jun 2008 10:44 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    The date was beautiful and very romantic, I enjoyed reading it a lot! Severina sounds like a sweetie and it was very nice of her parents to do what they did for Sev and Alaina. Sev sure wasn’t expecting everything to be on the house!

    I absolutely loved the talk between Sev and Alaina! It was great that they could share so much about themselves with each other and told how much they mean to the other. Perfect chapter title, they truly love each other just they way they are! *hides from booing crowd chucking tomatoes* lol

    Well, time for the kids to face the music. The house is a disaster and what they did was truly wrong. Sev will definitely be giving a long disappointment speech and I hope the boys regret their actions. Lexy should be fine, I cant see the boys pinning her in with them. I wonder how Tobias and Sirius will take the news that the kids duped them and took advantage of their state?

    I'll review your other chapters as soon as I find time to read them! Promise ^^.

    P.S. When I read that the guy (a concierge?) had a peacock feather quill, I totally thought of Lockhart! I wonder what he’d be doing in your fic? The thought of the pompous git doing something really menial cracks me up.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, that would be really funny, now wouldn't it? Pity I didn't think of it before.  But I had Tristan use a peacock quill because it's fancy and it's a fancy restaurant.  And I thought of the chapter title for this while I was at work.  Our Muzak station was playing Billy Joel, I'm sure you can guess what song was on, LOL.  And I was stuck for a title and suddenly I thought, wow that's perfect!

    And the kids will indeed have to face two angry Snape men, or at least Harry will, Ron gets to face Molly, poor kid.   

     

Title: A Stranger Is Watching 06 Jun 2008 8:17 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful Chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I won't keep you waiting long!
Title: A Stranger Is Watching 06 Jun 2008 7:39 pm
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome update! I love how you write Harry's POV, it's so realistic! You have a wonderful voice! Loved the whole chapter, only now I'm really scared!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much1 You're sweet!  And I hope you're not that terrified! LOL
Title: A Stranger Is Watching 06 Jun 2008 7:37 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sweet chapter! Loved the whole Sev & Lexy moment and the Father's Day was great too. Hope the stranger isn't someone sick, like Lexy's dad.

    Author's Response: Thank you and the ID of the man will be revealed next chapter
Title: A Stranger Is Watching 06 Jun 2008 7:35 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Lexy1 I feel really bad for her. Good thing Severus was there to make her feel better, he would know better than anyone how she feels. Loved all the gifts and the breakfast-the donuts were a big hit, and Tobias' comment about them was priceless. "breakfast of champions" !

    I hope to God the watcher isn't Dan returned to make their lives hell again.

    Author's Response: yeah, Sev makes everyone feel better, but he would know how to deal with Lexy considering where he's been.
Title: A Stranger Is Watching 06 Jun 2008 7:29 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great Father's Day. Love how Harry isn't jealous any more of Lexy, poor girl, I hope the one watching her isn't Dan, because she'll just die. Write more soon!

    Author's Response: Yes, lexy's been through hell, much like a certain Healer.  And something wicked this way comes!

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