| Title: Snape's Punishment
| 19 Aug 2008 8:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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That was a bit different then I expected, but I liked it. Now maybe they'll start getting along and quit driving Sev nuts. But I don't envy them those chores, especially the laundry, ugh! I hate doing laundry normally, never mind that way!
Author's Response: me too! Laundry is such a pain! That's why I made them do it as a punishment.
| Title: Sibling Rivalry
| 19 Aug 2008 7:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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God help them but now they are dead!
Author's Response: You could say that! Keep reading and you'll find out what happens to them.
| Title: Enter the Dragon
| 19 Aug 2008 7:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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Wow that was some chapter! draco and Harry quarreling, well that was coming. And then poor Harry's anxiety attack. Man that really scared me. Good thing Severus was there to help him through it.
Author's Response: Yeah, those two will take time to get along a lot of it. And Harry's nightmares are getting worse.
| Title: Nobody's Son . . .But Mine
| 19 Aug 2008 7:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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Yay for Severus telling Dumbledore off! maybe now he'll quit sticking his nose in where it doesn't belong, huh?
Author's Response: Doubtful, haha!
| Title: Lessons and a Letter
| 19 Aug 2008 7:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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Awesome, I love the idea of the timeclock and Severus's lessons were just what harry needed. Vernon's dead, yay! And now draco's coming? Won't that be something surprising?
Author's Response: Yes it will just wait. And I was so glad to kill off that beast!
| Title: Misunderstandings
| 19 Aug 2008 7:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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This line was the best. it really shows how much Severus has changed.
"He was sick of shadows and blood, sick of watching and never acting, of pretending to be one with people who were coldblooded murderers and rapists and bloated with evil. It was time for the serpent to shed his skin, and be reborn anew."
I was right too, Sev was mad, but he was also fair. Excellent job!
Author's Response: Glad you liked that line. I agree, Severus was fair.
| Title: New Beginnings and a Nightcap
| 19 Aug 2008 7:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Aww! That was really sweet to buy Harry ice cream and the part about remembering Lily and Sev's past made me cry it was so moving. Poor Harry, and poor Sev too! neither of them know how to talk to each other. And now harry's gonna be in sooo much trouble for getting drunk. He'd better hope he wakes up before his dad, though I don't think that'll happen. Shoot!
Author's Response: No they don't but eventually they'll learn. And yes, he is going to be in some trouble.
| Title: Spirited Away
| 19 Aug 2008 7:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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Loved the fae connection and Severus's reassurance. The manor sounds so awesome, I want to live in it.
Author's Response: You and me both. Too bad it's not real, huh?
| Title: Ties That Bind
| 18 Aug 2008 2:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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Why is Albus such a fruitcake? Can't he leave Harry alone, for once? I mean really!
Author's Response: Nope, he's a meddling old man who thinks he knows best.
| Title: What Goes Around Comes Around
| 18 Aug 2008 2:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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Brilliant job! Loved it all!
Author's Response: Thank you! The retribution was piece of very wicked fun.
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