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Reviews For The Heir to Prince Manor
Loved it, but one thing - 13 years is not close to two decades. Author's Response: Well, yes, he would, but you're not getting that POV. You'll see what happens next chapter. It's gonna be very action packed, I love my fight scenes, FYI. And yes 13 years isn't two decades, Smidgen was exaggerating to make a point to Harry that he shouldn't begrudge his father some companionship of an adult kind.
Author's Response: Thanks, and I shall be updating soon! Get ready for a chapter that will be filled with wizards & warriors vs. darkhounds & Unseelie mages.
Author's Response: Well, if I answered that question . . .I'd ruin the surprise! So be patient and soon you will know!
Author's Response: Thanks, I love dogs, actually all animals, except for spiders, which is why I always have some kind of animal in my stories. As for Harry, you're right, he can get mouthy, since he's faced death before.
Author's Response: Yes, they certainly will be coming to the rescue, if Sev has anything to say about it!
Author's Response: Actually he didn't, the hunt WAS up ahead of them, but the Unseelie gang ambushed them.
Author's Response: I know, but it was necessary!
Author's Response: Yes, she can be, but she can also be a very good friend, as you'll see in the next chapter. And no, you definitely don't want to get her mad, she can be very dangerous. But then again, so can Severus when he's mad.
Author's Response: Thanks and please keep reading!
I like Sarai, she seems like a really respectable and caring person. I think that she makes a nice match for Sev, now that Lily is gone. At first I shared Harry's thoughts about them being related, but it's true that they are very distant so there is no harm. I think that it would be great if the boys shared their owlets! I have a suspicion that Harry will end up giving Frost to Sarai, which would be nice :). There is something that confuses me though and that is Pigwidgeon; Ron received Pig from Sirius to replace Scabbers on the train ride back home after 3rd year, yet you had Harry mention that Ron has always wanted his own owl. Now, Ron can still definitely have Zephyr, (especially since Pig is always so hyper and clumsy!) I think that would be really nice, but what I wanted to know is what happened to Pig? Anyway, next chapter sounds really interesting! It's bound to be exciting, hope to read it soon :). P.S. I would be fine if Draco's feelings for Hermione stay as a crush, I can deal with that. Author's Response: There's a simple explanation for that, Ron gives Pig to Ginny and keeps Zephyr. |
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