| Title: A Bit of Mud and Water
| 27 Jul 2008 1:32 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Loved it! The dynamics between the three are really great and it shows. It's taken them a long time to get this far but that's the way it should be.
Author's Response: It has, but that's jsut how it goes sometimes.
| Title: A Bit of Mud and Water
| 27 Jul 2008 1:30 am
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| Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed)
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Brilliant! I love the way the boys argue and then get along, it's so typical of kids that age--they fight one minute and the next are best friends. The owls have wonderful names and I love the mudfight. it's about time Sev went to play wit his sons! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks and you're absolutely right about teenagers. They all seem to behave that way, at least in my family where we have a lot of cousins around the same age.
| Title: A Bit of Mud and Water
| 27 Jul 2008 1:27 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Wow! This was great and I love the idea of Draco and Hermione! The mudfight was wicked too!
Author's Response: Thanks and I hope you like the rest!
| Title: A Bit of Mud and Water
| 27 Jul 2008 1:25 am
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| Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous)
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Aww, that was the best chapter yet! Hooray, Sev's finally playing with his sons! But ih, is he embarrassed at being seen by his teacher that way!
Author's Response: Yeah, but he'll ge tover it, LOL!
| Title: A Bit of Mud and Water
| 27 Jul 2008 1:23 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Fabulous chapter! Loved the names of the owls and the mud fight was just hilarious! Can't wait to meet Sarai!
Author's Response: Thanks and you can meet Sarai next chapter! I think you'll like her.
| Title: A Bit of Mud and Water
| 26 Jul 2008 9:00 pm
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| Reviewer: kyzhart (Anonymous)
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I love this fic. I like that you illustrate life lessons and how they each gradually change. I think it is very unique to have Sev linked to the Fae.
Author's Response: Thanks, I try to do different things with the characters in each of my stories, so they all have different premises and I like putting them in different situations so that they can learn something, because that's how we grow.
oh i loved the mud fight, it was awesome and severus joining in was even better, made it seem like they were a normal happy family who had mud fights all the time, keep this up
Author's Response: I figured they all needed some time to play and have fun, like a regular family.
loved the idea of a mud fight! it made me chuckle to see sev joining in and laughing, great chapter
Author's Response: Yeah, every so often the Potions Master lets himself become a kid again, and play with his sons.
| Title: A Bit of Mud and Water
| 26 Jul 2008 6:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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::claps hands like a madwoman::
Okay, Sarai is in the picture. Can't wait to meet her. What does she look like? ::grins:: Can't wait to see what sort of mischief the boys will get into with her around. ::rubs fake beard:: I wonder...
The mud war was a brilliant and fun twist to an already amazing story. Although I can just see Severus turning bright red with embarrassment in front of his ::cough cough:: friend.
Update soon my dear, you know how much I love it.
Toodles.
Jewels.
::waggles fingers::
Author's Response: You'll find out what she looks like in the next chapter. And the boys will learn some new things about the fae and Severus too. And yes, Sev was quite red underneath that coating of mud,ha ha!
now THAT was funny! severus was so embarrased when sarai came up and saw him covered in mud wasn't he?
Author's Response: He was blushing madly underneath that coating of mud, yes! *snickers uncontrollably*
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