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Title: Misunderstandings 21 Jul 2008 7:30 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm. Speaking of a first time with alcohol--and really overdoing it--seems to me awfully unrealistic that Harry didn't stay sick and headachey for the rest of the day. Maybe if he'd only overdone it by a drink the size of Severus', he wouldn't feel so bad. But two full glasses?! C'mon--poor Harry'd be sick as a dog!

    Author's Response: Honestly, I don't drink, or I only have one to two drinks socially, so I'm no expert on hangovers.  But I had a roommate that drank herself senseless nearly every night when I was a freshman in college, and some days she was sick as a dog, and other times she was sick for a few hours and then was fine.  I have no idea why that was so, but I decided to give poor Harry a break and make him react to the summerdew in that manner, because after being flayed to ribbons by Severus, it'd be awful for him to be sick all day.  Plus the humiliation of puking right in front of his father is potent enough along with the lecture to make sure he never drinks to excess again.
Title: Not Such A Spoiled Brat 21 Jul 2008 6:02 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! The Dursleys get their proper comeuppance, just as they've always deserved--and at the hands of Snape!!!
    And your description of him, likening him to the Angel of Death is right on, too!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I've always pictured Snape as a dark figure, the avenging angel, who comes with fire to cast down the wicked, and it's poetic justice really, since the Dursleys got away with child abuse in the books, in my opinion and they were never made to pay for what they did.  I'm a former preschool teacher and child abusers rank right up there with mass murderers and rapists in my book and calling the Dursleys to account here was just my way of balancing the scales.
Title: The Most Important Thing 20 Jul 2008 7:55 pm
Reviewer: Night_Childe25 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! An update! Poor Sev. He's just as messed up as poor Harry. Things should get better, until Sev discovers those grades, at least. LOL. Maybe Sev will be a bit understanding. I really enjoyed it and can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Yes, he certainly is! And as for Harry's grades . . .you'll find out what they were and his father's reaction in the next chapter. 
Title: The Most Important Thing 20 Jul 2008 3:12 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry's grades? Uh-oh. I wonder how they'll be? I have a feeling that Harry could be a straight A student if he wanted to, but hanging around with Ron, who is a bit lazy and unconcerned with his grades, probably doesn't help. I think that Harry's an average student and that Snape will start pushing him to do his best. I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: No, it doesn't, and Harry will soon learn that Severus expcets him to do well in school, though there are certain classes that he excels at, like Defense and Transfiguration and in most others he does well, when he cares to apply himself. 
Title: The Most Important Thing 20 Jul 2008 2:23 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    loved it!

    Author's Response: Thanks, Amy!
Title: The Most Important Thing 19 Jul 2008 11:42 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter and severus trusting someone to poke in his thoughts and dreams was very good to see and severus needs to learn that everyone isn't perfect

    Author's Response: yes, he does, though it is hard for him to comprehend that given his background. 
Title: The Most Important Thing 19 Jul 2008 10:31 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    another brilliant story! its taken me 2 days to read, 2 days well spent, lol i really liked your idea of having smidgen help with harry's nightmares its really unusual, i also love the idea of being able to make time slow down and go back its perfect for giving the three of them longer to bond. im now adding this to my tracked stories list and hope to see updates soon!

    Author's Response: All right and thanks so much, I'm happy you like it! There will be a lot more going on at the manor and some harrowing adventures for the three before this is done!  I figured I had to do something with time to let the three bond the way they needed to, otherwise it would seem too rushed and that's not what I wanted. 
Title: The Most Important Thing 19 Jul 2008 9:55 pm
Reviewer: boycrazy30008 (Signed) [Report This]
    oh BURN!!! Is Harry get in trouble???

    Author's Response: You'll see! heheh!
Title: The Most Important Thing 19 Jul 2008 8:37 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    NICE WORK!!!! Please update soon! :)

    Author's Response: Thanks and you'll be seeing what else is in store for our three favorite heroes soon!
Title: The Most Important Thing 19 Jul 2008 5:09 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ::growls as fingers curl around a glass carafe and flings it at the wall::

    May I /please/ kill Tobias and Micah? How /dare/ they treat Severus Snape in such a way?! If I was there... someone would most definitely die and it would not be Severus - oops, my apoglogies, Sev.

    It was a chapter well worth the read, my dear. I cannot wait to meet Sarai - she seems interesting and I have the feeling she'll remind me of Lily in some way. (I can't write Lily at all.)

    Update soon, darling, I'm looking for more, as always!

    Love,
    Jewels. ;)

    Author's Response: You're not the only one who wants to kill them.  *Grrr* I felt like unleashing a manticore on them myself.  As for Sarai, she'll be arriving in two chapters and she is a little like Lily, but also very much her own unique person.

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