| Title: The Most Important Thing
| 19 Jul 2008 1:43 pm
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| Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed)
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It was marvelous! I nearly cried when I read the line where Severus says, "Only three people, Smidgen." who ever cared for him and accepted him the way he was, and two of them were dead. Poor guy! I'd like to take Tobias apart and Micah too for that matter! And I loved the last part!
Author's Response: I know . . .so sad, right? I agree with you about T & M too! Thanks for reviewing!
I love this story. I was happey to see Smidgen could help not only Harry but start to help Severus as well. That last two sentences are sooooooooo true. I believe it with all my heart. Is Sarai coming soon? Another great chapter. Update soon your chapter end note saying what is next intrigues me. :)
Author's Response: You'll be seeing Sarai in . . .ummm two chapters I believe! And you're right about the last two sentences, I'm a firm believer in that as well. If you're not happy with what you do, then it doesn't matter what kind of money you make or where you live or whatever, you're miserable. So you might as well do what you love and to heck with everything.
awwww
loving it
smidgen is brill
Author's Response: She sure is! Aren't you glad they saved her?
| Title: The Most Important Thing
| 19 Jul 2008 6:34 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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I loved the way you showed how cruel and degrading things in Sev's past has shaped him and I hope he will take Smidgen's words to heart and stop blaming himself and accept himself for who he is.
Author's Response: So do I, the poor man needs to quit beating himself up!
| Title: The Most Important Thing
| 19 Jul 2008 6:32 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Aww, poor Sev! You can't help but feel bad for the man, he's had such a tough life. I'm really glad he has a friend like Smidgen though, he could use a few more like her.
Author's Response: Yes he certainly has and he could sue more friends like that. In fact you'll be meeting another one in a few chapters.
| Title: The Most Important Thing
| 19 Jul 2008 6:30 am
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| Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous)
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This story just keeps getting better and better. I felt so bad for Severus guilt is always the worst emotion to deal with especially guilt over your child. Can somebody switch Tobias into next week? And Sev's grandfather was a miserable old bastard too, no wonder the man has a complex! I loved the way he asked Smidgen to call him Sev, aww! And the last line was brilliant!
Author's Response: I know, poor Sev, we writers just love to make him suffer! Well, not me so much, at least I tend to give him a happy ending! :) So glad you're enjoying!
that was a very thrilling chapter, lilys last stand as you put it was very brave and couragous, i'm glad harry survived the confrontation with mouldywarts and that they managed to get rid of the evil strand of magic in him
Author's Response: Thanks, I've always wondered what the spell was like that she cast and decided to invent one. I also think she would've fought Voldy a bit more if she had enough power left after casting her protection spell over Harry. And getting rid of the blood link just evened up the playing field.
| Title: The Dark Bond
| 16 Jul 2008 10:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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You took facing the nighthtmare firmly into your hand... er... quill. It makes a rather interesting story. I am somewhat afraid of Severus' nightmares, though. Mila
Author's Response: Thanks and yes, Sev's nightmares . . .or memories rather are nothing to sneeze at. You'll see what I mean when you read the next chapter!
| Title: A Healing Touch
| 16 Jul 2008 9:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Thanks for saving the shimmerling! Mila
Author's Response: You're welcome! I'd never kill an innocent creature!
oohhhhh.
loved the fight between harry and old voldie. so does this mean that voldie wont beable to give harry visions?
anyway cant wait to see what you have snape see in his dreams
Author's Response: Yup that's exactly what it means. I've given harry a more equal playing field here with the blood link being destroyed, so Voldie can't see into Harry's head and gain any more info from him or make him do stupid things like in OOTP.
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