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Title: Dreamweaver 10 Jul 2008 2:35 pm
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oohh! That was awesome. Can I find a shimmerling in my garden? I really hope Smidgen can help Harry. And I'm glad Draco & harry's relationship is improving. Finally!

    Author's Response: yes, it took them awhile, but they're finally getting along, though they'll still have arguments and disagreements like any family.  And I'd love to find a shimmerling in my garden too! You'll see how Smidgen helps Harry in the next chapter.
Title: Dreamweaver 10 Jul 2008 2:33 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think Smidgen is awesome! You come up with the most creative characters, love it! I'd love for Sarai to meet the boys. Hope Smidgen can relaly help harry and then Severus too, he needs help also. I liked how Harry asked Draco for advice and then took it, LOL!

    Author's Response: I was wondering who would pick up on that last little bit.  I think it shows that draco and Harry a re maturing in their relationship little by little and beginning to become brothers the way Severus had hoped.   And you're right about Smidgen helping Severus, because he needs someone too.
Title: Dreamweaver 10 Jul 2008 6:22 am
Reviewer: Night_Childe25 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I love SmidgenI hope she can help Harry with his dreams. I would love to meet Sarai. Please hurry with the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks and Smidgen is very wise as well as being very intuitive and well, you'll see.  Glad you're excited about Sarai, I'm excited about writing her, she should be a trip!
Title: Dreamweaver 10 Jul 2008 6:00 am
Reviewer: Devilishlycute (Signed) [Report This]
    I am very much enjoying the story. I would love to meet Sarai and see how she interacts with the boys. I love the way the boys are getting along better...........working together on the chores is working. Severus is a very smart man. lol Keep up the great job. Waiting impatiently...........oooooopppppsss i mean patiently for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Yes, there's no doubt about that.  Severus has always been smart! Bit of a Freudian slip there, huh? LOL! I should be posting the next chapter tomorrow sometime!  You should meet Sarai in a couple of chapter, if this goes as planned.
Title: Dreamweaver 10 Jul 2008 12:44 am
Reviewer: Taruia (Signed) [Report This]
    So, I've been reading and really enjoying this fic, sorry I haven't commented before, I'm quite bad at that, but I have to ask, did you get some of this from The Dresden Files? If so that's really awesome, two of my favorite book series possibly colliding! Keep up the great work!

    Taru

    Author's Response: Oh so you've read the Dresden stuff too, so have I! I love those books, but I actually wasn't intending to base my stuff off them, it just seemed cool to have Sev and Harry and Draco with fae blood in them, I like to play around with things like that.  You'll be meeting Sarai, Sev's mentor in a few chapters too! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: The Art of Being a Shadow 09 Jul 2008 8:19 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww...

    The family's sleeping. Adorable and, you know what? they deserve it. The lesson was very interesting and I loved your reference to the grace of the Snape line.

    I apologize for not reviewing my dear. Excuses, excuses, excuses. But I'm going to give you one anyway. We're moving so we have to get everything ready for sale and it's been very hectic.

    I will read the next few chapters when I can. Right now, I really need to finish chapter 3 of Breaking Dawn before someone decides it's time to hunt me down and roast me alive.

    Yours,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response: That's all right.  Good luck with your move and all.  And keep writing I really want to read your next chapter!
Title: Dreamweaver 09 Jul 2008 7:50 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    oh wow! i can't wait...love the shimmerling's name by the way!

    i eagerly await the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks Amy! I should be posting the next one up soon!
Title: Dreamweaver 09 Jul 2008 10:54 am
Reviewer: tish tosh (Signed) [Report This]
    oh wow. cool name for smidgen. i would like to see sarai yes.

    are we going to see any other fae beings? i hope so.

    Author's Response: Right now I haven't planned on having anyone but Sarai show up at the manor, but perhaps she could take the boys on a little trip into faerie, but I'm not sure yet. Glad you like Smidgen's name, I thought it was fitting and cute too.
Title: Dreamweaver 09 Jul 2008 5:41 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, now I know what a shimmerling is. I'm glad Harry's gonna get help. I'd like to meet Sarai, but in a few chapters. I don't think it's time to introduce another character just yet. Thanks for the update. I can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response: yeah, I wasn't planning on bringing her in until much later, but I wanted to test the waters and see how many people would be ameniable to her before I introduced her.  I put a lot of time and effort into my OC's creating personalities and backgrounds ect for them and it irritates me when people think they don't belong in a story just because it's a fanfic, and you should only use the created characters.  To me fanfic is a free expression type of thing, it's taking characters where they've never gone before and having them do things and sometimes behave in ways the author didn't think of, and part of that is bringing in OC's that make the original character's lives more interesting.  One of the best examples of that is the Dragonlance series, created first by Margaret Weis and Tracy Hickman, but they later opened the series to other authors and let them play around in their universe with their own characters and the original ones.  It's a great series and if you haven't read it, you should.  Anyway, hope you like the next few chapters, your reviews are appreciated. 
Title: Dreamweaver 09 Jul 2008 4:43 am
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great work! Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I will as soon as DaughterofAres lets me know how she liked the next chapter!

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