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Title: Just Like A House Elf 05 Jul 2008 4:52 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved Sev's surprise at the end, and I loved this line: 'Harry, that boy would complain to the Almighty on Judgement Day that it wasn't fair and He needed to give him another chance.' Great job :D

    Author's Response: Yeah, Severus knows his son Draco all too well, doesn't he? He knows both of his boys and it shows, especially at the end of this chapter, when he rewards them with the nap.  I have it on good authority with five teenage nephews and a niece that sleep is a teenager's number one priority, then comes eating, hanging out with friends, ect...LOL!
Title: The Art of Being a Shadow 04 Jul 2008 8:46 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job, I loved it all! I'm not a big martial arts fan, but you did this chapter so well that even I could understand it. And I felt really bad for Sev having to endure all the crap by those scum DE's.

    Author's Response: Thank you, my brother is a ninjitsu and kungfu master so he helped me with this one!  And Severus has endured a lot as a spy, poor thing!
Title: The Art of Being a Shadow 04 Jul 2008 8:43 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Thought I left a review for this one, but I guess not! I really liked it. We learn some martial arts in the Air Force as part of our self defense program and this was very similar to our sessions, though we don't have an animated dummy, of course, we mostly spar against live instructors and other classmates. Very well done! I also liked Severus's little talk, as intelligence officer, I know all about gathering information and it's not easy!

    Author's Response: Wow really! I'm glad it seemed realistic to you! As for being a spy, you know you see it on TV, but I doubt it's really like that in the real world.
Title: The Art of Being a Shadow 04 Jul 2008 8:40 pm
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great job, I really loved the way you did the training session and named the dummy Voldy-ha! That was good! And Severus's talk was good as well, I like how he gave just enough detail so the boys knew he had done some dangerous stuff, but not graphic enough to petrify them.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I thought Voldy was an appropriate name and Severus woud know better than to scare his kids to death, they've already got enough to deal with!
Title: The Art of Being a Shadow 04 Jul 2008 8:35 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! I felt like I was there. Poor Severus, he's really been through a lot, like both of his sons.

    Author's Response: He certainly has, and there are demons in his past of his own so don't be surprised if he has a nightmare or two also.
Title: The Art of Being a Shadow 04 Jul 2008 4:16 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    you continue to amaze me!

    i am very entertained!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Amy!

    A lot of that martial arts stuff was gotten from watching my brother work out, he's got a degree in ninjitsu and jeet ku do and kung fu, he's very into it and I used to have to video tape him for his tests and send them away so he could advance to the next degree.  He used to tell me the forms and katas and why you had to learn certain things first, so a lot of the kin-sa-dor stuff is based on what he told me. 

Title: The Art of Being a Shadow 04 Jul 2008 2:20 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent, i loved how you had the two boys spar and then Severu spar by himself. Will we be seeing anything of Sev's mentor Sarai?

    Author's Response: Thanks and maybe I might put in a cameo appearance by Sarai in a later chapter, I'm not sure just yet.
Title: The Art of Being a Shadow 04 Jul 2008 12:04 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    whoot good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it! I have more planned for our favorite little family real soon!
Title: The Art of Being a Shadow 03 Jul 2008 11:32 pm
Reviewer: xoAngelicDemise (Signed) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter. I can't wait for more. I love this story!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I hope you'll like what I've got planned next!
Title: The Art of Being a Shadow 03 Jul 2008 10:12 pm
Reviewer: tish tosh (Signed) [Report This]
    loved it as per usual.

    cant wait to see whats next

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have a lot more in store for our favorite Potions Master and his sons as you'll see!

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