| Title: Lost In the Dark
| 27 Jun 2008 11:11 pm
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| Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
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I really like this story! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks very much!
I absolutely adore this story, and I'm really enjoying Snape trying to father these very different young men! Good job!
Author's Response: aww, you're sweet and I'm glad you're enjoying Snape's attempts to parent both Harry and Draco, it ain't easy!
that chapter was great, dragons wild sounds like a great card game and you should start a card making factory and make thousands of pounds, harrys dream was indeed traumatic, james was wrong, it was lily who lied to him not harry
Author's Response: Wow, wouldn't that be something if I could do it! And yes, it was Lily who lied to James, but in the dream Harry's subconscious is trying to tell him something about guilt and loss, you'll find out more about the dream next chapter!
Sweet!!
Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
| Title: Snape's Punishment
| 27 Jun 2008 4:26 am
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| Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous)
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Wicked chapter! I like Sev's style, he was creative without being overly harsh and he made his point very well.
Author's Response: Thank you, and I thought it was a pretty good way of having the boys get along without beating them senseless.
| Title: Snape's Punishment
| 27 Jun 2008 4:19 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Wow! he certainly knows how to make the punishment stick! Hopefully both kids will realize he means business and start getting along. Wonderful imagery here and I can't wait to read about the nightmare.
Author's Response: Yes Severus is very good at making the punishment stick! The nightmare should be posted shortly.
| Title: Snape's Punishment
| 27 Jun 2008 4:16 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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They got what they deserved, in my opinion, especially Draco. I don't think he'll forget again never to use martial arts on someone unless you mean to hurt them badly. that's the first thing we're taught in self-defense classes in the Air Force. I liked Draco's middle name too, that's the first time I've ever seen anyone give him one. Nice work and please update soon!
Author's Response: oh good, somebody actually noticed I gave Draco a middle name. I wondered if anyone would, I figured he needed one. And you're right about the self-defense lessons, I was taught that in my karate classes.
Well that was different from what i thought he'd do, but still fitting. I think the boys should start getting along eventually. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I agree and hopefully they've learned their lesson!
| Title: Nobody's Son . . .But Mine
| 26 Jun 2008 9:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed)
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Wow! Go Snape!
Author's Response: Thanks and you're my 200th revier!! yay! You get . . .a crate of butterbeer and candy and a kiss from our favorite Potions Master! :)
| Title: Snape's Punishment
| 25 Jun 2008 5:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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Well... I loved the punishment! ::cackles:: They deserve it, really they do. Those two should know by now - you do NOT mess with an angry Severus Snape. ::claps hands over eyes and shakes head:: Will they never learn?
I love my dear and am eagerly looking forward to more.
Yours,
Lady Jewels Snape.
Author's Response: No you don't, and they're typical teenagers, always pushing the boundaries. They'll test him a few more times before they finally learn, silly kids!
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