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Title: Enter the Dragon 22 Jun 2008 12:16 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww that was so cute he called him Dad. I was very happy to see Severus tell Harry that he talked to Dumbledore and that he is going to do everything in his power to stop the "savior of the world" from happening, because he's right Harry is just a kid, he deserves to be just that.
    I'm sure poor Severus is going to have his hands full with these boys for quite sometime. I like the idea that he treats Harry and Draco exactly the same, he doesn't take any of Draco's "pureblood" crap and making him do chores without magic, and he isn't letting Harry get away with anything either.
    I loved the way that Severus dealt with Harry's nightmare, not making a big deal about him getting sick, or coming to him upset. I'm looking forward to more interaction with everyone and the fights to start flying between Harry and Draco. (you know it's going to happen sooner or later).

    Keep up the totally awesome work and please please update again soon. This is really starting to be really good. LES

    Author's Response: Yes, there will definitely be more fights and arguments between the two, unfortunately for them . .. and for Severus, who then has to deal with them.  Poor Sev, no peaceful interlude for him, for he must be mediator between the two until they decide to quit feuding!
Title: Enter the Dragon 21 Jun 2008 9:19 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it, it was perfect! How Draco and Harry have all this resentment of each other, how an anxiety attack made Harry finally call his father "Dad". Loved it. Very well done!!

    Author's Response: Thanks, Jan! That resentment is going to get them both into some very hot water, as you'll see, for Severus wasn't kidding when he said he didn't want his house to become a battlefield.  And now that Harry has officially recognized him as his father . . .things between them will be much more affectionate. 
Title: Enter the Dragon 21 Jun 2008 8:27 pm
Reviewer: tish tosh (Signed) [Report This]
    cool.

    will the heir of prince manor be chosen before school starts or in a differen holiday?

    Author's Response: Umm . . .the heir will be chosen by the end of this story.
Title: Enter the Dragon 21 Jun 2008 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Noooo, My Sev!!!! I love it. I can see the jealousy angle affecting things until they realize that a parent can share their love. Maybe Sev should have them sit and share life stories. Great job..

    Author's Response: Yup, jealousy plays a big role here in the way those two behave towards each other.  They're acting like typical brothers trying to gain their father's affection.  Eventually, they will be able to sit down and have a discussion about their pasts, once they learn to stop arguing that is!
Title: Enter the Dragon 21 Jun 2008 7:04 pm
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    A great chapter. I love how you didn't make Harry and Draco instant friends, but they do get along later don't they? But please don't let Draco become the heir, that would be weird. I'll continue reading no matter what you do this is a well written story. Thanks for the chapter.

    Author's Response: The heir will be revealed . . .in the last chapter.  Draco and Harry will eventually shelve their rivalry, but not until forced to by Severus, as you'll see.  Thanks for reviewing and please keep reading!
Title: Enter the Dragon 21 Jun 2008 7:02 pm
Reviewer: Tree (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like this story. It is very good. I hope Harry and Draco start getting along. I would be good if Harry resorted to Sytherin to be with his dad and brother.I also hope that you let Harry be the heir to Prince legacy. Let Draco make he Malfoy name better.

    Author's Response: As far as Hogwarts is concerned, I haven't even thought that far ahead yet.  A Slytherin harry would be very interesting.  As for who will become Heir Apparent, you'll just have to wait till the end of the story.
Title: Enter the Dragon 21 Jun 2008 6:30 pm
Reviewer: chmcm (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you, hope you'll like the rest.
Title: Enter the Dragon 21 Jun 2008 3:27 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved it, truly I did.

    I hope that Draco and Harry do start getting along and become friends. I wonder how Ron'll react to the news that Harry's Draco's friend now? Hmm . . .

    Update soon, my dear. I shall read it and review now the summer holidays are here!

    ::cackles madly and mutters to self: maybe I'll even start working on my own story::

    Yours,
    Lady Jewels Snape.

    ::sidles out the door, still cackling::

    Author's Response: Eventually perhaps they will start getting along.  As for Ron, first he has to get over the shock that Severus is Harry's father, you'll be hearing from him in the next chapter, and Hermione also.  And Sirius too, eventually, once Severus allows time to resume it's proper course.  *chuckles wickedly* 
Title: Nobody's Son . . .But Mine 21 Jun 2008 7:37 am
Reviewer: Night_Childe25 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Awesome chapter! Go Severus! I loved the conversation between him and Albus. He was really in pissed off father mode. I loved the way he told him off. The conversation between Severus and Harry was perfect. I feel kind of sorry for Harry. He's so afraid of losing his place with Severus. All in all, it was great. I can't wait to see the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Severus doesn't tolerate anyone trying to hurt his children, and he now considers Draco his child as well.  So Albus better watch out!  And yes, Harry is very insecure, hopefully he'll get over it.  The next chapter is posted as of ten minutes ago, so enjoy!
Title: Nobody's Son . . .But Mine 20 Jun 2008 10:16 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I apologize for now reviewing - I've been busy but I have read the previous chapters.

    Well this chapter was . . . different. Ok. I'm really confused. Is Draco really Severus' son or does Snape only consider him a son? And . . . ::hides behind corner:: Don't hate me but . . . is this going to turn into a Severus and Harry and Draco story?

    I'll continue reading just the same - I still love the three of them together.

    Yours,
    Lady Jewels Snape.

    Author's Response: No, draco is not Sev's son, except by way of the guardian/ward connection.  They are related thinly by blood as cousins, but Draco considers Sev a father figure and Severus is his godfather.  He told Dumbledore that he should leave both his 'sons' alone because he wanted to illustrate that Draco was also under his protection.  Harry is really Severus's son, however.  And yes, you will be seeing the three of them together in this story, hopefully they may learn to be a family, since in  a way both are in desperate need of a decent father.

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