I'm surprised Harry didn't mention he tried to tell McGonagal and was sent away first year. Really great so far.
I'm surprised Harry didn't mention he tried to tell McGonagal and was sent away first year. Really great so far.
I really like this one so far. I have more to say, but it can wait
Another grawsome - gr(eat)awsome - chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I like your comments!
A great chapter - I'm looking forward to reading on!
Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you enjoy it.
| Title: Lost In the Dark
| 11 Jan 2010 4:44 am
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| Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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Poor Harry. I wanted to cry for him. I feel so bad for the poor boy but I liked the way that Draco reacted. I'm also glad that Harry had a chance to be a child for once with his father. And that his father had a chance to take care of his son the way he would have been able to had they known about each toher so long ago.
Author's Response: Yes, exactly. I'm glad you understood Harry's reaction. He's very damaged now and so he's not acting like a normal child would, and it does help that now he has Sev to turn to and Severus is happy to help his son with his problems because he regrets not being there for all those years.
| Title: Enter the Dragon
| 11 Jan 2010 12:34 am
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| Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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I absolutely love it. He's tender and stern. The perfect mixture. He's not a perfect person or a perfect parent by far...and I will point out here that no one is. Every parent makes regretful decisions...but...he's doing his best...just like most parents try. And I actually wish he was my parent. This chapter stirred a longing in me and...I honestly hope to be at least half the parent that Sev is, as you portrayed him, here.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked this part. ou're absolutely right and anyone who thinks there is such a thing is living in a dream world. Some readers expect him to be this all-knowing person and get angry when he's not. But like you said . . .the important thing is he tries.
| Title: Ties That Bind
| 09 Jan 2010 7:11 am
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| Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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Oooo...I love this. Especially the last bit. 'I'm done playing by your rules, old meddler. Now you'll play by mine'. That...*shivers* I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Good that means I've made you enjoy yourself!
| Title: What Goes Around Comes Around
| 09 Jan 2010 5:51 am
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| Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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HA! I love it!!! Snape whipping Vernon's butt with a belt? He deserved that if not much more. Simpering, doddering walrus! *snickers at Dudley* that was funny too...afraid of getting a piggy tail again.
Author's Response: Uh huh. He did indeed and I loved letting Severus do that to him. Yeah but Dudley wasn't half as bad as Vernon.
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