| Title: An Unexpected Visitor
| 16 May 2008 6:36 pm
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| Reviewer: danni coles (Anonymous)
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update pls
Author's Response: Thank you, I will as soon as I'm home.
| Title: An Unexpected Visitor
| 15 May 2008 10:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wow, great start!!! Fantastic opening and set up. The characters' thoughts are all done well and in character. I hope that Harry thinks fast!
Author's Response: Thanks Jan! I hope you like the rest of it!
Wow this one sounds very interesting can't wait for further chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks and I should be posting some more this weekend!
I like the beginning so please continue, and lets see what happens in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks and I'll be posting the next one when I go home, since I'm in VA
nice start...very clever having snape just show up like that...petunia's gonna have a cow!
Author's Response: Yes, she most certainly is! Just wait! Hehehe!
| Title: An Unexpected Visitor
| 15 May 2008 4:39 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Great start here, I like how you focused on Sev's past with the DE, they're so disgusting! I can't wait to see who is coming down the stairs. Is it Petunia or Vernon?
Author's Response: I know, they're the ultimate in grossness! And as for who is coming downstairs, you'll find out in the next chapter!
| Title: An Unexpected Visitor
| 15 May 2008 4:36 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Excellent start, I'm eager to find out what happens next. Poor Severus!
Author's Response: Thanks and poor Sev indeed! he always gets the worst of it, doesn't he? Well, excpet for Harry.
| Title: An Unexpected Visitor
| 15 May 2008 3:26 am
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| Reviewer: Dulce Barahona (Anonymous)
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I'm interested in seeing what happens next!
But I do have one question? How is Snape with the DE's prior to GoF if Voldy isn't back yet and the DE's are all pretending to not be a part of that... is this story going to be AU?
Author's Response: Yes it is, didn't I post that in the warning section? If not, I'll go back and do it, but I thought I did. Thanks for your review!
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