the banner is great and i am greatly looking forward to the next chapter. how long til it's up? plz say soon!!!! fantastic chapter once again. this story is really becoming one of my faves and i look forward to reading more
Author's Response: Thanks. It will be up in the next couple of days. - August Sky
the banner is great and i am greatly looking forward to the next chapter. how long til it's up? plz say soon!!!! fantastic chapter once again. this story is really becoming one of my faves and i look forward to reading more
Author's Response: I'm thinking probably 4 days to a week for the next chapter... Sorry I can't update sooner, but I have another story I'm working on at the same time, and I can just do both about once a week! lol Thanks! - August Sky
This chapter was really well written, and certainly explains a lot about Malfoy. I love your banner xD
Author's Response: Thanks so much! - August Sky
| Title: Penitent
| 11 Jun 2008 8:27 am
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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Interesting. I hope someone tells Harry though that it wasn't because of him that Draco was punished, and Draco shouldn't be allowed to say such things. Of course it was horrible and evil that Lucius hurt Draco, but it was Draco's choice not to tell, not Harry's. It's not his fault he was punished. Harry is not responsible for everyone eles's actions. He needs to learn that valuable lesson. Great chapter, and I enjoy your characterizations. Cool banner as well.
Author's Response: I agree with you. Harry really needs to learn that not everything is his fault and that he can't control other people's actions. Thanks so much. -August Sky
EXECELLENT!
Author's Response: Thanks! - August Sky
I don't know if i can wait a week for another chapter, :( Please update soon, I can't wait fo more!
Author's Response: Hahaha. I'll try!! - August Sky
Wow, just wow! Great story idea so far. The chapter was long, grim and perfect. Thanks so much for writing this, I can't wait to see where this will go. Mrs. Weasley was just horrible, worse then Umbridge. I hope there is a very good reason for her to be like that. Polyjuice or something?
Author's Response: Haha. Thanks! There's certainly a reason, but I won't say just yet. Thanks for reviewing! - August Sky.
Author's Response: Haha. Thanks! There's certainly a reason, but I won't say just yet. Thanks for reviewing! - August Sky.
Nice job with the typical "Snape has to take Harry to Pomphrey on the first day of class to be healed and begins to rethink what he knows about Harry" chapter. ;-) The interaction with Draco was interesting. So Draco isn't going to become Harry's best friend instantly, eh?
Author's Response: Oh, but you knew that had to be in there! That's a mandatory scene for any abused!Harry stories! It was going to be a little different, but I needed Pomfrey to know. You'll see why soon. =D And no, Draco is very much going to be IC, or at least, as much as possible at least in an abused Slytherin House story. It'll take some time for them to figure things out. Thanks! - August Sky
| Title: Apperception
| 03 Jun 2008 3:14 pm
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| Reviewer: LaToya_Snape (Anonymous)
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i like once a week chaptes
Author's Response: Thanks! - August Sky
this was a really good 2nd chapter. i cant wait for the plot to develop more. its going to be a great story. i dont care how long the chapters are as long as ur updating frequently
Author's Response: Haha, thank you so much! The plot is going to start moving some more soon, although I'm not going to rush it. I can usually balance plot and character development pretty well. Thanks again! - August Sky
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