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Title: Disillusioned 01 Jun 2008 4:56 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Pretty refreshing premise. I'm looking forward to lots more:)

    Author's Response: Oh, thanks! - August Sky
Title: Disillusioned 31 May 2008 10:23 pm
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like this story! Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you! - August Sky
Title: Disillusioned 31 May 2008 5:58 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohh bad Mrs. Weasley bad! maybe she's under the imperious and only turns on him when he feels sorry for himself??? He's practically a Weasley so i can't imagine her doing that to one of her own, or even to any other... my interest is definitely piqued in regards to the Dursleys and whether your;ll be bringing them into the picture? Ohhhh and then there's Ginny... quite an enigma you've woven there, meant to be a slytherin all along, that means cunning, clever and from what Snape says 'abused', six brothers, one father, mother? could throw in a possible creapy uncle?
    I guess the first chapter sets the precedent, this is not going to be a happy fic! Not a very good move on Dumble's side to put the saviour of the wizarding world into the pit of vipers, many of whom's parents, siblings and relative's are death eaters, and who's head of house is his number two,(i wonder where your going to go on that side as well- Snape evil or good?) Oh the possibilities are endless, can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon.

    Author's Response: Haha, your review is packed with questions! I love it! There's certainly a story behind Mrs. Weasley's behavior. I haven't quite decided if the Dursley's will make another appearance yet, I think that will be decided when I write out the chapter where Harry finally tells Snape about them. As for Ginny, she's an interesting character as well, she's really going to bring the story around so it all makes sense. (Or, that's the plan, anyways. =D) And no, this is definately going to be an angsty fic, but it'll have it's better moments, as well. As to the Slytherins/Snape, well,, that'll be seen to shortly. Thanks again. -August Sky
Title: Disillusioned 31 May 2008 5:47 pm
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    this story is awsum so far...i really love it. are you going to be making regular updates? im putting this in my faves. well done for your first S/H fic 10/10!!!!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much! Yes, I'm going to try my best to have regular updates, probably weekly, or sooner, if I get them out. I'm not working with a beta on this project, so it's progressing a lot faster. Thanks again! - August Sky

Title: Disillusioned 31 May 2008 3:19 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good start and interesting development with Mrs Weasley... Harry really needs help and hopefully Snape could help him soon - Suggest that Snape sends Harry (and Ginny) to Madam Pomfrey to check up so they can see the damage done to Harry. Mrs. Weasley will have a fit when she hears her daughter is now in Slytherin. Update soon

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you! Yes, Harry really needs some help. We'll see what develops with Snape and Harry in the next chapter, as Snape's already recognized that Harry's in a ton of pain. Thanks again. - August Sky
Title: Disillusioned 31 May 2008 7:26 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this so far. I like Snape and I'm rooting for Harry and Ginny. Interested too, in Hermione's and Neville's resorting and why they too, are important to the Wizarding world. I love all four of these characters, and Ron too, best, and I can't wait to see how you develop this.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! The story focuses mostly on Harry and Snape, with a lot of Ginny, too, Ron, Hermione, and Neville are also important, especially when Voldemort makes his appearance into the story. Thanks again! - August Sky

Title: Disillusioned 31 May 2008 5:59 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Not pick up on the forshadowing??? Ginny was removed from her home for the summer. Snape has already alluded to possible sexual abuse and Molly has turned into "Mommy Dearest". The only girl in the family in how long and she has six older brothers??? I thought it might have had something to do with M.D. and possibly the incident in first year turning her mother against her, but now??? As for Harry, the field is wide open!

    Author's Response:

    Haha, good guesses, but the foreshadowing I was alluding to is only one sentence long, and refers to both what happened to Ginny and with Harry. Good try, though! Thanks! - August Sky

Title: Disillusioned 31 May 2008 3:55 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story looks pretty interesting. Is part of the reason Ginny's in Slytherin not just abuse, but because of her possession by Tom Riddle?

    Author's Response: I think that would certainly be part of it, adding to her 'Slytherin-y-ness.' But the Sorting Hat intentionally sorted her wrong the first time, meaning she was originally supposed to go there in the first place. Her possession happened after she'd been sorted. It will be explained, tho, I promise! Thanks! - August Sky
Title: Disillusioned 31 May 2008 2:20 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Is Molly W possessed or something? Or is she suffering from Multiple personalities?
    I would never see her as someone who would torture a child. A good spanking maybe but not what she did to Harry.

    Author's Response: I can safely say that Mrs. Weasley is not possessed, but there is more to her than meets the eye. Thanks! - August Sky
Title: Disillusioned 31 May 2008 2:00 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice job, this story sounds good. I'm looking forward to the next update.

    Author's Response: Thanks! - August Sky

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