Great chapter, I like how you use both magic and Muggle methods for Sev to diagnose Lily. It's very clever.
Loved the scene with the bread too1 Update soon, i think the next chapter's gonna be a doozy.
Author's Response: Thanks, i wanted him to do something different from the ordinary. The bread-making is something I do a lot. I've just updated FYI.
| Title: Something Odd
| 16 Nov 2008 2:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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So happy you posted this and I could read before work. Loved the scene with harry, Vi, & Lily, made my mouth water. Now I want some bread warm from an oven! And Severus's instincts are right, the poor guy. But he was very through and a good doctor. Update soon!
Author's Response: hahaha! *here's a piece of virtual bread, LOL! I've just updated thanks for reviewing.
oooo no our boys can't have a bad day
Author's Response: Unfortunately, they have an absolutely awful one...you can read it now, I just posted!
oooo they are so adorable!
Author's Response: Yes, I know! I loved writing this one.
| Title: I Wish
| 16 Nov 2008 2:22 am
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| Reviewer: caro (Anonymous)
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Hi, I always like this story, but have to be honest, we all know what's coming, and I don't want to read anything sad, especially when they're all so happy at the moment, so I think i'm gonna say goodbye to this fic now.
Author's Response: Please read the next few chapters, Lily doesn't die right away, and there are some classic moments between harry and severus that shouldn't be missed. But yes, the end of this story is tragic.
Wonderful chapter! I loved the lily and Harry moments, but this is foreshadowing for the disaster I know is coming.
Author's Response: Yes and thanks for reviewing.
Oh no, something tells me this is the beginning of trouble? Is this the part when Lily starts getting sick??
I feel really bad now!
Author's Response: it starts in the next chapter, but she won't start getting really sick until four chapters past the next one.
| Title: I Wish
| 16 Nov 2008 1:40 am
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| Reviewer: Kerowyn (Anonymous)
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Aww, such a sweet chapter, and yet I just know something bad is going to happen.
Author's Response: You're right, something bad does happen. Thanks for reviewing.
| Title: Playing With Fire
| 16 Nov 2008 1:38 am
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| Reviewer: Kerowyn (Anonymous)
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Loved this chapter! That's about what would've happened if me or my brothers ever played with firecrackers at my house. Very real and I had to laugh at Ron wanting to trade in Ginny for a puppy. My brother wanted to trade me in for a horse!
Author's Response: LOL! great job here!
great chapter, very cute and snuggly chapter, i used to play the game where you make shapes out of clouds
Author's Response: I love that game, it s one of my favorites. I also like I Spy. I enjoyed writing this one, giving Lily some one on one with Harry.
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