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Reviews For Where Shadows Go
Title: Wet Sunday 09 Nov 2008 3:27 am
Reviewer: Kerowyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter, I had to stop reading since I was laughing so hard.

    Author's Response: Aww!
Title: Wet Sunday 09 Nov 2008 1:50 am
Reviewer: Kara (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Lovely stories. It's been awhile since I read the others to this series, but I thought I would finally read this one. I love the writing and your rendition of little Harry is soooo cute!
    As for kids, I don't have any yet, but I did baby-sit a kid who had just turned 3. His potty training had been finished but he needed help with his pants. When he was finished, he completely took off his pants and underwear and made a dash for the door. That wouldn't have been too big of a problem except we were at the doctor's office his parents owned. His father, to make matter worse, is a proctologist. I latched the door and told him I was counting to ten and if he didn't come over to me with his pants so I could put them on, I was going to have the person who was close to the bathroom and was working go and get his mother. He watched me with big eyes as I counted. I got to ten and went to the door. He couldn't get over fast enough. About a week later he tried to pull it again. I got to 3.

    Author's Response: Wow, glad my nephew never tried anything like that, but that is really funny! Actually one of my sisters is a doctor and her son came to her office one time and had to get a tetanus shot and ended up screaming "I hate you mom!" so loud everyone in the office heard it. Talk about embarrassing.
Title: Wet Sunday 09 Nov 2008 1:29 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! I cracked up reading this! It was so funny and so true to life!

    Author's Response: Thanks, glad you're enjoying this!
Title: Wet Sunday 08 Nov 2008 7:10 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    i didn't put things down the toilet but me and my sister poured a whole bottle of washing up liquid down the kitchen sink and the drain outside had bubbles surrounding it, our mum took a photo of it, anyway back to the story, ui'm sure harry and neville have learned a valuable lesson about flushing things away down the toilet

    Author's Response: Oh man, now that's a new one! Once my niece overflowed the bathtub by adding too much bubble bath, LOL! rnrnThey've learned their lesson, at least Sev hopes so, LOL!
Title: Sick for Christmas 08 Nov 2008 6:42 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, poor sev being in bed for christmas, luckily i havn't been ill at xmas but i once had the flu over new year, it wasn't nice at all, i'm glad they managed to enjoy opening the presents and that everyone liked them.

    i had to smile at harry playing healer, he did a great job

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he takes after his dad.

    But at least Sev could watch Harry open his gifts and enjoy his first Christmas in their new home.

Title: Little Leonardo 08 Nov 2008 6:20 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter and yes i do think they have dealt with harrys creative streak very well, all kids would like there own space for there own and his art will definately brighten up the room

    Author's Response: True and that's why Lily thought of it. Their kitchen will be much prettier.
Title: House Call at Hogwarts 08 Nov 2008 6:06 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, poor minerva didn't know what to do with harry and poor severus having harry act like that

    Author's Response: No, she sure didn't know how to deal with a very cranky insistant toddler, LOL!
Title: Little Leonardo 08 Nov 2008 2:52 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw Harry is such a cutie! Naughty, but a cutie! What a little imp! ;)

    Poor Harry though, he just wants pretty walls! Please update soon, because I'm dying to know who gets sick. I thought of Harry, but now I'm thinking Sev! Grumpy Sev! Hee hee!

    Oh, and Lily, what a good Mom. We always second guess ourselves, don't we? Ah...the joys of parenthood! :)

    Author's Response: Yeah, he's a real piece of work! It's such fun to write him like this too. brings back memories of my little nephews, who were like devils incarnate on occasion. rnrnI've already updated the next chapter, so you can see who is sick and what happens after that with Neville and Harry too. And there's a new short fic to this novel as well that I just posted too.
Title: Wet Sunday 08 Nov 2008 2:47 am
Reviewer: Mikee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another fun chapter. I have a friend whose grandson did something quite like that -- after he got over his fear of the toilet. He was terrified of the toilet for several months, but once he got over that, he took great joy in flushing things down it ... especially his baby brother's pacifiers and his own new pull-ups. He even put a brand new, full roll of toilet paper in the toilet. What a mess that was.!!!

    Oh, and just as an FYI -- I marked 'Favorite Story' and 'Favorite Author.' I hope that will cause me to get alerts. I'll cross my fingers. Thank you again for letting me know about the new chapter. I'm still thinking about Harry's eye exam. I wish Sevvie could have done my first exam. I was five, and the eye doctor left a LOT to be desired. LOL

    As always -- I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

    Thank you.

    Author's Response: I guess kids are all alike, it's fascinating to play with the toilet. At least that's how the pediatrician explained it to my sister when she asked why her son kept doing that. rnrnI wish I could have Sev examine my eyes too. I was two when I got my first pair of bifocals and I hated them. I used to take them off and hide them, drove my mom crazy and all my sisters too, because then they had to find where I put them, LOL! But now I'm so used to them I can fall asleep with them on, and sometimes do.rnrnFYI, I've just posted a short companion piece to Shadows, called Mother's Day here.
Title: Wet Sunday 08 Nov 2008 2:46 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh yes, this brings back a lot of memories. I used to have a plumber on call nearly everyday when my child was two for shoving spoons, forks, you name it, down the toilet. I got to learn his name and how to use a "snake" quite well.

    Great job! I also liked how Lily compared Harry's reaction to James', showing how different the two are personality wise.

    Author's Response: Oh boy! Sounds like you had an imp too! But you survived, right?rnrnGlad you liked this one and the comparison between Harry and his real dad.

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