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Title: A Good Father 24 Sep 2008 10:52 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, severus was very good with harry and his little tantrum, just to let you know britain isn't a football team, its england, wales, scotland, northern ireland or ireland, there is no joint british football team.

    hal gave severus some great advice, he is a great friend to have

    Author's Response:

    OMG, I do know that, my dad watches GOAL TV all the time, and I listen to it sometimes.  I don't know why I wrote that there, thanks for pointing it out to me, I'll go and fix it. 

    Hal is a much better friend and father figure to Sev than Tobias right now.   

Title: A Good Father 24 Sep 2008 9:48 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    That was lovely. I rather wished my parents had done the spanking, then the hugging, but I can honestly say that none of my cousins got the spanking then the hugging. We just got the spankings and the "go to your room to think over why you deserved that".

    Harry was being a bit of a brat - poor tired little boy.

    Author's Response:

    Aww, that's too bad.  For us, it was yell, spanking, thinking and then a quick hug and "we won't need to discuss this again, right?" And the answer was always NO!

    When they're tired, most little ones are brats, I see it all the time at work and with my little nephews, when they get very cranky it usually means nap time.

Title: A Good Father 24 Sep 2008 8:44 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah! An update! Woo hooo!!!!

    Author's Response: Great huh? I should have another soon. 
Title: A Good Father 24 Sep 2008 7:09 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    ah what lovely father/son type interaction with sev and hal, i had to chuckle at naughty harry, he's so cute when he's grumpy : )

    Author's Response: Ain't he just, though? Makes me want to hug him.
Title: A Good Father 24 Sep 2008 6:11 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so happy you updated! this chapter was lovely.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'd been planning to have a talk with Hal & Sev for awhile. 
Title: A Good Father 24 Sep 2008 5:45 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I just wanna hug Harry, he sounds like an adorable little tyke!

    Sev will make a good Daddy! (Oops, I referred to Snape as "Daddy"; never thought I'd ever put "Snape" and "Daddy" in the same sentence! Hee hee!

    Can't wait till Sev pops the questions! Hope it's your next update, and hope it's soon! :)

    Author's Response:

    Well, little Harry calls him Daddy, you know! :)

    I'm trying to write the next chapter now, but in the meantime I have updated Angel.

Title: A Good Father 24 Sep 2008 5:05 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aww! I'm glad Severus has Hal to talk to. My only nitpick is that it's football, not soccer. Thanks for the update. I can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response: Yes, Severus values Hal's advice highly, since he's a better father than his own was.  Oops, I meant to write football but I'm so used to thinking of soccer it just slipped out.  I'll go and fix it thanks!
Title: You Are My Life 23 Sep 2008 11:01 pm
Reviewer: GoldenPhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story. I know Lily is going to die but I want to read more. I've noticed that you haven't updated this story in a while. Please update soon.

    Author's Response: yes, that's true, she will eventually.  I haven't updated this one because I've been working on my other story Arms of a Dark Angel.  But I will have a chapter posted for this soon, I haven't forgotten it.
Title: Great Balls of Fire 16 Sep 2008 11:52 pm
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter made me laugh very loud, I liked how Sirius turned into Padfoot and howled like that. It was perfect. :)

    Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that, I love it when I can make my readers laugh!
Title: You Are My Life 15 Sep 2008 3:02 pm
Reviewer: preposterous purple crocodile (Signed) [Report This]
    Sevvy, stop being so overprotective! *growls*
    Lily can take care of herself!

    lol good chapter! Great battle scene!
    Harry is brilliant :) fangs and all.

    Author's Response:

    he can't help it, LoL!

    Glad you liked that battle scene.

    Harry's something, the little vampire!


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