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Reviews For Where Shadows Go
Title: You Are My Life 30 Aug 2008 7:17 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    *shudders* ewww Tabasco sauce...my parents did the same thing but it was for swearing and lying. I still hate it to this day!

    Lily is awesome!

    This chapter rocks! I can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Thanks, and my niece does that when her kid bites, that's where I got it from.  I should be posting more soon!
Title: You Are My Life 29 Aug 2008 7:30 am
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! The good guys won! I thought they would, but you never know. And Harry's a little devil with his biting and screeching. LOL!

    Author's Response: yes they did!
Title: You Are My Life 29 Aug 2008 6:04 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved them, they were very creative. Lily was awesome. And Harry, he is such a little rascal...my sons did very similar things as a toddler.

    Author's Response: great, the spells were fun for me to create.  lily was once in training to be an auror and harry is such a little boy.
Title: You Are My Life 29 Aug 2008 6:01 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Good for Sev and Lily! I was glad to see Lily have a more active role in defending those she loves. I also liked the part with Sirius and Remus yelling at Sev to quit kissing Lily. And Harry was just too funny and bratty. My son used to do the same thing when he was that age.

    Author's Response: harry's a typical toddler.  I love him though. I like Sev and Lily together they make a great team.
Title: You Are My Life 29 Aug 2008 5:56 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter! The whole thing was wonderful. I liked how you let Lily fight too and boy that Harry is a handful!

    Author's Response: he sure is and I don't like mousy Lily.  She's a fighter.
Title: Frost Faire 29 Aug 2008 1:38 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Aaaaauuuugggggghhhhhhh! You can't leave us hanging there! Please, please, please don't let anything happen to Severus!

    Very well written. I loved the descriptions of the Frost Faire and Harry's snowman was just adorable.

    Author's Response: Don't worry, I just posted the follow-up chapter! So go and read it!  Glad you liked my Frost Faire, it's really based on an actual event that I described via Severus.
Title: You Are My Life 29 Aug 2008 1:26 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved Lily telling Sev firmly to put her down, lol Harry is so cute when he is being punished, typical toddler screaming lol

    Author's Response: Yes, Lily can take care of herself and she wanted Sev to know that.  Harry really is such a typical toddler, I modeled him off of my nephews.
Title: You Are My Life 29 Aug 2008 12:33 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aw! Little Neville! I'd like to see more of him. Great chapter.

    Author's Response: You may see a few more appearances and possibly Dudley and Blaise and Ron as well.
Title: You Are My Life 28 Aug 2008 11:59 pm
Reviewer: Devilishlycute (Signed) [Report This]
    Way to kick butt Sev.and Lily. Those Death Eaters never had a chance. lol Harry is a lil rascal ain't he. Great chapter.

    One question....how do you get the banner on? Will you let me know please i believe my yahoo addy is on my profile. I would greatly appreciate it.

    Author's Response: Yes, that's right.  They got smacked good! And yeah, Harry is a lil rascal, all right! I'll email you about the banner, no problem.
Title: You Are My Life 28 Aug 2008 11:44 pm
Reviewer: Eden (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hot sauce in a toddler's mouth is too severe of a punishment; that stuff burns. Lily should have given him a spank on the bum right when she found out he bit Neville--not after.

    I like how you write Harry, though. He's a cutie.

    Author's Response: I know, it's what my mother used to do to me and my sisters as kids.  But Lily is by no means perfect, she's still learning too as a parent and she'll make mistakes.  I think she's at her wit's end with Harry biting people. And Sev swatted Harry for trying to bite him too. Eventually he'll learn, he's a typical mischievous toddler.

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