You better should update soon this time - with an end like this! I liked this chapter, though I dislike old sappy movies and don't understand why Lily does like them. Yuck. Good thing love is blind, otherwise Severus would have hard times, watching crap :)
Author's Response: Because she's Lily, LOL. And Sev will put up with a great deal for her cause he loves her so much. I'll be updating soon.
good chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Love it please update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Great! I have some more love scenes planned for the next one, plus a surprise emergency and something more sinister at the end, but you'll see when I post it.
very sweet! i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I love the romance part of this! And there's more to come.
| Title: Hero's Farewell
| 17 Aug 2008 9:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Oh, Lily using her wand? What about the underage law? The true love kiss. Mmmm. Update soon, will you? Little-sun
Author's Response: yes, there's more to that story than what they discussed. And I'll be updating soon. Lots of romance coming your way.
| Title: Never Second Best
| 17 Aug 2008 9:17 pm
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The recept for the bunns? Please? Heh, just kidding. I liked Molly and Ron, why would you ask? They were cute. Little-sun
Author's Response: yeah, I'll get around to it. LOL! You'll see more of the Weasleys in future chapters
| Title: More Than A Friend
| 17 Aug 2008 8:09 pm
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Ha! A romance is brewing. Yay. Little-sun
Author's Response: yes it is and we're all glad for it!
OMG, thirteen-months old look at cartoons in your country? Here the psychologist recommend to keep babes from TV until at least two years.
A nice chapter, though! *loves Snape*
Author's Response: No, cartoons are the norm here for us Americans and Brits too, I'd say. Specially Disney and Looney Toons. Though my nephew, who is two, loves Dora the Explorer and Diego.
| Title: Testing the Waters
| 17 Aug 2008 7:53 am
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| Reviewer: Talon3 (Anonymous)
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Wow! Not meaning to disrespect James, but if he treated Lily like that, then she definately needs someone, Sev, who would treat her like she is his empress of his world. And are you going to go formuch more romance, not in a uh bad way, I mean like PGish, orwhat. Not going over, I don't think. It seems to me that is how your writing style is. PG. LOVE IT!!!
Author's Response: Yes, James was never really around for her, since he was busy with his career and obsessed with hunting Voldemort. He loved her, but on his own terms. Severus, however, loves her for herself alone, and he will continue to show that. There will be a few more romantic chapters in here and I keep the explicit part to a minimum, since this is a website that's rated for teens and families. Plus, HP was never really meant for fully explicit romance and that kind of thing. Thanks for your review and so glad you're loving this!
| Title: Testing the Waters
| 17 Aug 2008 4:28 am
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| Reviewer: Keats (Signed)
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Finally Sev told Lily how he feels it was a very good evening. love the stories of their youth and the pranks on Petunia LOL
Author's Response: Yeah, they had some fun as children, didn't they? And it was good that Severus finally found his nerve and said what he feels for once. More romance to follow. Thanks for reviewing and I've also updated Angel too.
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