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Reviews For Filling the Void
Title: Chapter 1 07 Jul 2008 9:44 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent start to this sequel. It gives us a great feel for the fact that, yes, Severus is now Harry's father, but that doesn't mean that all of Harry's issues were automatically solved.

    This little glitch cracked me up: "textile exploration" I think you meant "tactile" which means sense of touch rather than fabric. But maybe Harry wanted to touch just the drapes and bedspread? ;-)

    Author's Response:

    Hahaha I totally meant 'tactile' and must have had a weird little mind hiccough.  Thanks for pointing that out.

    You've hit the nail on the head -- they've started something, but Harry isn't "fixed" all of sudden.  And Severus is about to find out just how many issues the boy has.

Title: Chapter 1 07 Jul 2008 9:40 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful! And yay for a sequel! That was heartbreaking, though. Poor Harry. I am so glad he has Snape. And I just want to pop those Dursleys one. I hope Snape can figure out what is going on with Harry. It was fun to watch them interacting together in the house. Thanks for a great start to a new story. :o)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing!  Snape has tried to let Harry resolve his sleep issues naturally, but after a few days he now realizes he must step in.  And so he will, and very quickly.

    Of course that's only the first of their adjustment issues...


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