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Title: Night Flyer 14 Oct 2008 1:34 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    They better win! Great description of the race track and how it is modified for flyers instead of runners.

    Author's Response: Thanks, it was tough trying to think of all that.
Title: Night Flyer 14 Oct 2008 12:58 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry and Boreal are going to win... aren't they?? They have to! they cant go to that awful O'shea!

    Author's Response: If I told you the answer . . .it would spoil the next chapter. 
Title: Night Flyer 14 Oct 2008 11:09 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    oooo that was great! i can't wait for the next part with the race lol i can just imagine Sev freaking out

    Author's Response: Yeah, poor Sev's gonna have a nervous breakdown because the ones who fly in the Skybolt ain't nice people.
Title: Night Flyer 14 Oct 2008 9:22 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    It is so wonderously written - unlike horse races where the rider rules the horse, here it is the exact opposite. It nearly brings the question why they are not racing ridersless /is that really a word?/ Mila

    Author's Response:

    Technically, pegasus and rider are supposed to work as a team, but since Harry has almost no experience, he relies on Boreal to know what to do, it's kind of like pairing a green rider with an experienced jumper in a steeplechase.  However, the Skybolt is a race unto itself and even Boreal's experience won't be enough, he'll need Harry for encouragement and to fend off the other riders trying to run him off the course or box him in so he can't fly quickly.

Title: Race Preparations 13 Oct 2008 2:49 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent! Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Race Preparations 13 Oct 2008 2:49 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the detail you put into this part, I can see it in my mind! Beautiful! Sev & Harry are great together, as usual.

    Author's Response: Thanks, so glad you like it!
Title: Race Preparations 13 Oct 2008 2:44 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter!! I loved how harry finally knows about the bracelet and can't wait for the race to start.

    Author's Response: Thanks the race will begin soon!
Title: Race Preparations 13 Oct 2008 2:42 am
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome update! I love the silks and how Sev comforted Harry! Post again soon!

    Author's Response: I'm trying, believe me!
Title: Race Preparations 13 Oct 2008 2:40 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sounds like this should be one exciting rae! Can't wait for Harry & Boreal to start practicing!

    Author's Response: Thanks so glad you like!
Title: Race Preparations 12 Oct 2008 5:35 pm
Reviewer: Mimiheart (Signed) [Report This]
    I've debated reviewing this. I really like the overall story, but I'm having trouble enjoying it. I found it preachy at one point, and I don't like mixing religion and fanfic. Otherwise, the story itself is good, and I'm interested in what happens next.

    Author's Response: Sorry if you're uncomfortable with my mention of religion, I have no wish to debate it with anyone, and I did post a warning at the summary of my fic, beneath the picture.  I find it ironic that people are more disturbed over religious aspects in a story rather than the torture of a small boy by Voldemort and Vernon beating Harry with various things and abusing him.  It's kind of scary when you think about it.  Thank you for reviewing.

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