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Title: Birthday Surprises 28 Sep 2008 6:06 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    love the foreshadowing...

    When Ron explodes....everyone better watch out!

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Yeah, that's for sure! Or Harry, both of them have mean tempers.
Title: Birthday Surprises 28 Sep 2008 5:58 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry had such a wonderful time I am so happy that he could be a normal child and celebrate his birthday. Sev's gift is amazing and for Harry it would provide him with some great memories.
    Ron is a prat and is becoming an even bigger prat than before... I am glad that Harry did not notice his jealousy to spoil the party. Jealousy and Envy are two of the seven deadly sins and Ron is falling big-time; while Hermione can begin to see Sev like her “Hogwarts dad”, Ron just doesn’t have the maturity or the heart to appreciate anyone other than himself, Ron is proving to be no kind of friend at all.

    Author's Response: You'll see the Pensieve memories in a few chapters, it'll be really emotional.  Ron . . .he is very immature here and has a good deal of growing up to do. His jealousy blinds him to the truth. His envy is going to come back and bite him in the ass, as you'll see, and then perhaps he'll learn something.  Hermione has always been able to see behind masks and has always known that Severus was more than what he seemed, she is intuitive as well as book-smart. 
Title: Birthday Surprises 28 Sep 2008 5:55 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, Ron will always be jealous. I foresee rough waters ahead, my captain.

    Author's Response: Until he gets good whack upside the head! And there will be squalls aplenty next chapter!
Title: Birthday Surprises 28 Sep 2008 5:32 am
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh, oh, jealous Ron - that red hair will always get him into those hot spirits! Let's see how fast he holds a grudge in your piece!

    Author's Response: yes it will and it might not be a slong as you think! You'll see!
Title: Pegasus and Rider 28 Sep 2008 5:17 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! Loved the banter between harry & Sev. "You wouldn't be my Harry unless you conspired to give me a stroke every other month!"

    I love that line, I laughed so hard reading it! Brilliant!

    And the bonding was excellent. This just keeps getting better & better!

    Author's Response:

    Aww, you're sweet!

     

Title: Pegasus and Rider 28 Sep 2008 5:13 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    This was so good I cried. I loved the scene between Snape & Harry in the kitchen, with Harry managing to work Sev around to letting his friends come--the sly little scamp!

    And the part with Boreal, mere words don't do it justice. It was incredible!

    Please update soon!

    And feel better, take some Tylenol or Advil, drink lots of fluids and rest!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Doc for the advice!

    So happy you're enjoying this! I though the bonding was especially touching and there's more to come!

Title: Pegasus and Rider 28 Sep 2008 5:10 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    harry's so clever, he managed to outsmart Sev, haha!

    And I'm so happy for Harry & Boreal, they make a great team! Love this so much! :)

    Author's Response: Yup, he's more like Sev than he knows! harry and Boreal make the ultimate team as you'll see later on.
Title: Pegasus and Rider 28 Sep 2008 5:08 am
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, I absolutely loved it!

    The bonding scene was excellent, it made me cry!

    can't wait to see how Sev reacts and for Harry's birthday!

    Author's Response:

    thanks and I hope you brought lots of Kleenex! LOL!

    Harry's b-day is posted

Title: Pegasus and Rider 28 Sep 2008 5:06 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    YES!! YES!!

    BOREAL FLIES!!

    I love this story!

    Can't wait to see what R & H think!

    And feel better soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I love your enthusiasm!
Title: Pegasus and Rider 28 Sep 2008 3:18 am
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes! I knew I was right! (doing a happy bonding dance...)

    Excellent chappie!

    Author's Response: Thanks! You're the first one to figure out what was going to happen.  Good for you! *gives a certificate to Flourish & Blotts*

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