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Title: Wyvern Attack 21 Sep 2008 2:10 pm
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    HOLY GOD!!
    I was on the edge of my chair here!
    Great battle and I'm glad they all survived.
    Harry's reaction after was normal, let Sev take that into account when punishing him.

    Loved Boreal, save him Sev!

    Author's Response: I'd never kill off my favorite characters! Read the next chapter to see if Sev saves Boreal.
Title: Wyvern Attack 21 Sep 2008 2:07 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh brilliant chapter! All of them are a force to be reckoned with! Severus should ground Harry from his Animagus form. Please save Boreal, I love him!

    Author's Response: yes they are and I'll take that punishment into account, thanks for the suggestion.  Read on to see what happens to Boreal.
Title: Wyvern Attack 21 Sep 2008 2:05 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow that was intense! Please don't let Boreal die! He is brilliant. And Severus should use the first punishment he was thinking about in the forest, it's a good one.

    Author's Response: Okay, I'll take that into account.  Boreal's fate is revealed in the next chapter.
Title: Wyvern Attack 21 Sep 2008 1:29 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Keeping a child from doing what they love but don't need is a sure deterrent. I vote for grounding from the animagus form (even though I love Whisper and Wraith). Maybe he also has to feed and water Boreal as he recovers:) Thanks for the great updates.

    Author's Response: Yes, that's a good idea.  Boreal will need a lot of care over the next week or two.  Thanks for the reviews!
Title: Wyvern Attack 21 Sep 2008 12:20 am
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Now that I'm awake and alert, here is my promised review.

    After thinking about it, I must say that Harry should get off lighter than two weeks if you must punish him. Being frightened to death and nearly killed should have taught him what Severus was trying to - in fact, the wyvern did a very good job of that.

    Boreal, as with all your characters, is round and original and I enjoy reading about him. The bit with Rellah was well done as well. I like the little wood sprite.

    Does this mean there will be no Wraith and Whisper next chapter?

    Love,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response: I'd agree, Severus might be inclined to be lenient with Harry considering what nearly happened.  Boreal will play a major role in upcoming chapters.  Wraith and Whisper will return, but not for awhile.  The duration of Harry's grounding, at least.
Title: Wyvern Attack 20 Sep 2008 6:00 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    boreal sound like a good character, i love the way harry believes sev can do anything, it shows such faith : )

    Author's Response: Yes, Harry worships Sev, since the man has saved his hide so often.  Boreal is an important character, as you'll see.
Title: Wyvern Attack 20 Sep 2008 4:04 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    My stomach is in knots; what an intense scene! Harry is turning out to be a powerful wizard; isn't he? Severus will have to teach him control though.

    I think that grounding Harry from becoming an animagus for two weeks is perfect--let the punishment fit the crime!
    I think that as much as Harry loves to become Whisper; it would make him think twice before leaping into danger without thinking and about disobeying Severus again.

    Oh, and I think that scrubbing a few cauldrons always gives one time to regret one's trangressions; don't you think?

    Author's Response:

    He is indeed, and Severus will have to step up his lessons on control a notch.

    I am seriously considering that punishment as the best course of action, and scrubbing a few cauldrons for reflection too and perhaps helping with Boreal too. 

Title: Wyvern Attack 20 Sep 2008 2:50 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like the punishment you came up with.

    I'm sorry, this review is short but it's early in the morning and I'm still tired and half awake.

    I very much liked this chapter. I can't wait to see what you do in the next. So does that mean there's no Whisper and Wraith? ::pouts and winks:: That's ok.

    Update soon, dear.

    Love,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response: Well, not for right now! I should be posting a new one shortly!
Title: Wyvern Attack 20 Sep 2008 7:55 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Nice way to introuce the horse and keep it

    Author's Response: Thanks and I hope you like the next one.
Title: Wyvern Attack 20 Sep 2008 7:48 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    seriously, i think the boy has suffered enough with having the crap scared out of him...i think he has made up for any dissobediance....

    i hope he can save Boreal...he's magnificent!

    Author's Response: Okay, I was kind of thinking that myself, so maybe Sev should go easy on him this time.  Glad you like Boreal.

    Author's Response: Okay, I was kind of thinking that myself, so maybe Sev should go easy on him this time.  Glad you like Boreal.

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