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Title: A Hidden Danger 16 Sep 2008 5:10 am
Reviewer: akblake (Signed) [Report This]
    You've got Harry playing Slytherin twice in a row. The chapter where his broom went berzerk had Slytherin players, and again the team is playing Slytherin. It's too soon for it to be the final playoffs of the year, especially when there hasn't been any mention of other quidditch games played.

    Author's Response: Actually my timetable is correct, if you follow the original book, since right after the Forbidden Forest the trio finishes the year and goes after the Stone.  I mentioned another game before the one in this chapter where they played Ravenclaw, but months have gone by, even though i didn't mention any of the other games, Harry did play them.  Sorry if it was confusing, but my main focus wasn't Quidditch, but the quest for the Stone. 
Title: The River Wild 16 Sep 2008 3:30 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter!

    I was really scared Harry was gonna die but then Wraith--sweet Wraith--saved him!! Yay!

    I loved the part with rellah helping Harry in the bath, that really cracked me up!

    And so did the part with little Sev and the exploding potion!
    Just wicked! 1000/10

    Author's Response: No, I'd never kill Harry!  So glad you liked this one! Wraith will always save Harry, except from himself, of course. 
Title: The River Wild 16 Sep 2008 3:27 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aww, I loved it! The nickname was cool and so was the part with the deer and the bear. And of course, Wraith was so awesome when he saved Harry from drowning. That kid! He'll never stop getting in trouble, will he? I've got a son just like him and I can relate perfectly to Severus.

    Author's Response: probably not!
Title: The River Wild 15 Sep 2008 10:53 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I have to say that Severus was a little responsible here. He has an active son who loves adventure and also has a tendency to break the rules.

    I knew Harry was going to give the canoe a try. Severus should have put a spell on it so that Harry couldn't touch - rather like we parents childproof our houses.

    I really like Eileen

    Author's Response:

    In hindsight, I'm sure Sev's kicking himself for not doing that.  But he wanted to give Harry a little freedom there in the glen, kind of like a man with a prize race horse, only Harry, like a typical headstrong Thoroughbred, took advantage and jumped the fence and bolted.  But he won't be doing anything like that again soon, for now Severus is going to tighten the leash again. 

    Eileen is quite the character, isn't she?

Title: The River Wild 15 Sep 2008 10:21 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ::grins::

    Yep. Another one.

    Just had a thought.

    Is Harry going to wake up with Wraith over him? You should do it you know!

    Ok, ::waves like a moron::

    Byebye!

    Author's Response: You never know!  Wait and see!
Title: The River Wild 15 Sep 2008 10:14 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ::grins like a mad idiot::

    I LOVE YOU SNAPEGIRL!!!

    Wraith! You added Wraith! Wonderful, glorious, Wraith! ::shrieks:: I love the overprotective snowleopard! ::grins:: Ok, you probably think I'm crazy now but that's ok.

    ::cackles:: I loved this chapter. Truly loved it! My favourite one so far!

    Ooh, as for Harry's Animagus form... ::grins and winks:: I made the mistake with Severus but I'm going to offer a suggestion as well as guess. Why not make him a large cat like his father? ::grins weakly:: I've always loved that idea. ::shrugs:: It's your story and you know how much I'll love it.

    Byesies for now,
    All my love,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Wraith's awesome, I love him too! I want to hug him!  But I want to hug Sev too . . .boy do I want that!

    That's a good idea for Harry's Animagus form.  Thanks!

Title: The River Wild 15 Sep 2008 7:58 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, sev will be needing heart surgery soon to help his poor weary heart, how much more can he take?
    harry needs to curb his impulsiveness and think before he acts

    Author's Response: Got that right! Poor guy . . .Harry does really need to get a handle on his impulsive streak, which Severus will stress to him once more next chapter.
Title: The River Wild 15 Sep 2008 7:29 pm
Reviewer: Arashi (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I like how Eileen brought back memories of Snape as a youth. That was certainly rich.

    Author's Response: Wasn't it funny . . .Severus the premiere Potions Master . . .exploding cauldrons! What delicious irony, LOL!
Title: The River Wild 15 Sep 2008 7:20 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved it - poor Severus, I know EXACTLY how he feels.

    Author's Response: me too, my nephew drove my sister crazy just like that!
Title: The River Wild 15 Sep 2008 6:21 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    this was excellant! forgive me for not reading it sooner! i would love to see harry become an animagus!

    Author's Response: Thanks, you'll see what form he takes next chapter, don't worry!

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