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Title: The Peaceful Glen 11 Sep 2008 11:04 pm
Reviewer: caro (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sounds lovely, I think I would like a few restful weeks there as well!!

    Author's Response: Believe me, so would I!
Title: The Peaceful Glen 11 Sep 2008 9:49 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ::cackles madly::

    Oooh, Snapegirl, I love it. Really I do. A fluffy chapter but that was ok! You need fluff every once and a while. ::winks:: Although I bet it won't last long. ::waggles finger:: I know you too well my dear.

    ::sighs:: All right, I'll take my leave until next time.

    Update soon.

    Love,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response: Yes there will be some more fluffy chapters and then things will get exciting again and it should be great!  
Title: The Peaceful Glen 11 Sep 2008 9:20 pm
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Signed) [Report This]
    The cottage and woodkin were great. You did a great job detailing the peace and serenity surrounding it. I found it very calming and just what I needed. Too many angst stories have Harry in constant peril without any peaceful interludes. In your story, bad things may happen, but good things do as well. The characters have hope. I'm also enjoying the faith displayed by Severus. The story is a great read. I always look forward to it and I'm glad you haven't ended it. Lots of things for these characters to be able to see and do, right:)

    Author's Response: No and it's going to be a nice long one, since there will be many things for Harry to learn in the glen from Severus and Rellah.  I feel that after a long action sequence both the character and I need a break, a chance to catch their breath and relax.  Harry needs time to heal both physically and emotionally from Aunt Marge and to bond with Severus so I've given him time to do that.
Title: The Peaceful Glen 11 Sep 2008 8:33 pm
Reviewer: Romado (Signed) [Report This]
    i love the cottage and having the portrait of Sev mom is great. cant wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Yes, Malachite cottage is lovely and I wanted Sev to have a picture of his mother to talk to.
Title: Farewell Feast 11 Sep 2008 7:40 pm
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've always thought that the changing of the house cup winner was a dirty trick, I wondered if Dumbldore was really so oblivious of the damage he was doing - or if he really didn't care if he alienated the Slytherin children.

    Author's Response:

    personally, I don't think Dumbledore does anything without a purpose. He knew what he was doing when he awarded the three all those points, he was setting them up as heroes, and encouraging them to keep on risking their lives in order to prepare to fight Voldemort and company.  He also didn't care if he insulted the Slytherins or not, since he tended to favor his own House.  Look at how he used Severus and disregarded completely the fact that Sirius and James nearly killed him at the Shrieking Shack, no wonder why Snape was so bitter. 

    That was why I decided to even the score and give the Slytherins their due for once.

Title: The Peaceful Glen 11 Sep 2008 6:32 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    i loved all the detail about the cottage and its surroundings, i can totally imagine it : )
    i like the portrait of eileen being there too, brilliant chapter : )

    Author's Response: great, I had fun describing it and I felt Eileen deserved to be represented in the cottage and for Sev to have someone to talk to and ask advice from, besides Rellah, of course.
Title: The Peaceful Glen 11 Sep 2008 6:02 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    once again you have amazed me!

    everything is wonderful! the portrait the woodkin! everything! it's awesome!

    Author's Response: Thanks and there will be even more things happening in the near future.
Title: The Peaceful Glen 11 Sep 2008 3:21 pm
Reviewer: Mila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Haha, spicy cat man. *grins* I was surprised by Eleen, in canon she wasnt handsome (though she may very well be that kind of girl who will become pretty after her 20). I guess I like Malachite cottage, we shall see in next chapter(s)... *hint hint* :) Little-sun

    Author's Response: True, but you're right, she grew prettier when she grew older and also since this is AU I chose to make her better looking. 
Title: Farewell Feast 11 Sep 2008 2:28 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The end of the feast felt ... odd to me. I mean, Harry is a good kid, but this is a bit weird. In the same time (how much unnaturaly it felt) I liked it very much, because I hated this moment in canon books. You sorrected a big unjustice JKR commited, Merlin bless you. I never liked Dumble much, he is cruel, more or less consciously. Little-sun

    Author's Response:

    I had to have Harry approach Dumbledore and ask him for the extra points for Slytherin, he's the only one Dumbles would have listened to and it corrected a major injustice.  Dumbledore always claimed to never favor his own house, but he lied, since he allowed the Marauders to get away with everything and never punished them, and he put Harry and his friends in danger more than once by sitting back and watching.  He also deliberately encouraged the rivalry between Gryffindor & Slytherin by never rewarding or praising the Slytherins for anything.

Title: The Peaceful Glen 11 Sep 2008 2:23 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the glen, very nice - and Rellah is a hoot!

    Um, one thing though " It looks small, but it's much bigger on the outside than the inside" Don't you mean it the other way around? As in Wizard Space?

    Just grabbed my attention.

    Keep posting!

    Author's Response: Yes, I need to go and fix that I meant it the other way around!  You'll be seeing more of Rellah too!

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