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Reviews For Arms of a Dark Angel
Author's Response: aww, you're sweet!
Author's Response: I will and thanks for reviewing.
Author's Response: Great, and thanks for R&R
Author's Response: Really? Looks like you need a box of Kleenex. Lol.
Author's Response: Sweet, huh?
Author's Response: yeah, it was very cool, no? Too bad I couldn't film it.
I for one love the religious aspect of the whole story I think it is very well done love the prayer very much I know any parent with a dying child has prayed that prayer. On another note; that little boy is in a lot of trouble – I know you said you weren’t going to do CP other than a smack or two but a spanking could be implied, because that little boy was very disobedient and should have known better. Author's Response: Yes, it was, since now Harry can love Severus without worrying that he is "betraying" James's memory. Severus really needed the emotional release there, and Minerva was the only one he would have allowed to see him fall to pieces like that, unless it was Lily and Hagrid, who had comforted him when he was 13 over his mom's death. You'll see what happens about them becoming a family legally next chapter. That prayer is very important and shows Sev's deep connection to God which is a focal point of this story. yes, Harry is in a whole lot of trouble, and Severus will punish him appropriately, as you'll see next chapter. Harry will be quite sorry, trust me.
Author's Response: yeah, that part made me choke up too when I wrote it. It's like a Hallmark moment.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Author's Response: Here's a tissue . . .so glad you liked it and there's more to come. |
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