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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Suspicions 28 Aug 2008 3:27 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    this was very nice. i just love the interaction in this chapter! and your version of snape finding Harry. it was wonderful!

    Author's Response: I wanted to make it different than the books, and throw in some different plot twists.
Title: Mirror of Dreams 28 Aug 2008 6:43 am
Reviewer: Bask (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oddly enough i was looking forward to harry being fe? does that make me weird? anyway lovely chapter, i really enjoyed how mirror pulled harry to it. i always thought that he was too easily swayed from it in the 1st book.

    Author's Response:

    Well, he was of fae blood in Heir to Prince Manor, but here he's not.  The mirror in my version is much more seductive, I agree about the first book too, which is why it's different in my version.

Title: Mirror of Dreams 27 Aug 2008 6:35 pm
Reviewer: Ripuku (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww. I want the Magic Surgery too. I have really really bad eyesight. I can't go out anywhere without my glasses, I'm so nearsighted.


    Your story is really good. I like how Snape has almost a double personality.

    Author's Response: Me either.  I take them off and I'm blind as a bat.  I can't even drive at night, as I have no peripheral night vision.  And Severus will continue to have that dual personality, so to speak, until the masquerade is no longer needed.  Glad you're enjoying this!
Title: Mirror of Dreams 27 Aug 2008 5:03 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that version of the mirror was great, i would of preferred a more creepier mirror in the books, i do hope one day that harry and severus can come out into the open about what they have been through

    Author's Response: Someday they might be able to, if Severus can assure Harry's safety and his own.  Right now, it's safer for them both if their relationship remains a secret.  I always found the Mirror of Erised was treated too lightly in the books, I mean why hide this mirror away if it wasn't dangerous? So I made it very insidious and subtle and seductive, just the kind of object that would tempt an innocent lonely boy like Harry.
Title: Mirror of Dreams 27 Aug 2008 12:32 pm
Reviewer: Lionessmon (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant and yes it is creepy, I look forward to the next chapter, post soon.

    Author's Response: I will, the mirror was meant to be more frightening than the books.
Title: Mirror of Dreams 27 Aug 2008 7:39 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    This was great, you captured poor harry's longing beautifully as well as the seductive call of the mirror. Ugh! Made me shiver.

    Author's Response: Thanks! It made me shiver too.
Title: Mirror of Dreams 27 Aug 2008 5:34 am
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Is this a foreshadowing for the end of the story perhaps?

    ::raises eyebrows::

    Simply magnificent. I love father Severus! Oh and Harry... the poor child, I just want to pull into my arms and never let him go!

    Update soon, my darling. I am so very looking forward to more.

    ::glances at Author's Notes:: Why do I even bother getting my hopes up, hmm? ::shouts, waving hands:: FINE! I GIVE UP! D'you hear? I GIVE UP! YOU WIN! I'll wait like a good little girl for your revealing chapter of Snape's Animagus form. ::pouts:: Happy now?

    All my love,
    Jewels

    Author's Response: Perhaps.  And Harry really does need someone to watch out for him.  As for the Forbidden Forest, it's coming, promise! 
Title: Mirror of Dreams 27 Aug 2008 2:34 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    ooh! Very creepy indeed! Downright frightening in fact. I hate to think of what might have happened had Dumbledore not gone ot get the mirror.

    You write creepy very well.

    Author's Response: Thanks, it's not my favorite thing to write, but I figured the mirror was more than it was made out to be in the books. And Harry was lucky indeed.
Title: Mirror of Dreams 26 Aug 2008 11:56 pm
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. and yes very very creepy

    Author's Response: Thanks and I did warn you!
Title: Mirror of Dreams 26 Aug 2008 11:19 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG!! Tears were coming to my eyes! Well done! I wanted so badly for that dream to come true for Harry!

    Author's Response: So did I! Poor kid! But maybe someday . . .

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