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Title: An Unfortunate Accident 13 Aug 2008 3:31 am
Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting cliffhanger. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Oh good, I'll be posting it as soon as it's written. 
Title: An Unfortunate Accident 13 Aug 2008 2:23 am
Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love the twist,love the story

    Author's Response: Thanks very much.  The next part is coming up!
Title: An Unfortunate Accident 13 Aug 2008 2:07 am
Reviewer: Nightshade (Signed) [Report This]
    A CLIFFIE!!! URG! This chapter was great! Please update soon.
    Nightshade :)

    Author's Response: You ought to expect them, y'know! :)
Title: An Unfortunate Accident 13 Aug 2008 12:26 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    A hexing - coming your way. Severus will find him. I am quessing it was Quirrel.

    Nice way for Severus to let Draco know that he isn't king of the world.

    Author's Response:

    Ahh . . .no, no not the Tickle one...*falls on the floor laughing*

    Did Severus tell you I'm very ticklish?? And he ought to know . . .*winks*

    Yes, Severus will find him.  Your guess . . .is quite correct.

    And yes, Severus does have a way of getting his point across, doesn't he?

Title: A Real Detention 12 Aug 2008 3:05 pm
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! You updated! I really liked Ron's little "talk" before the detention. And the way Severus said he will handle Malfoy too and how he brought Lily into it, that's good, showing Harry what king of person his mum is. And the "mouthwash"--poor Harry. But you can't deny it wasn't deserved. Loved the last part too. Slammin!

    Author's Response: Thanks.  I figured then was a good time to bring up Lily, and soon Severus and harry will have a long discussion about her, since Severus can now bear to talk about her and how her love changed him. 
Title: A Real Detention 12 Aug 2008 3:01 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. The punishment was fair and I think both Severus and Harry learned something. Love & forgiveness two of the most important things in the world! Love this story.

    Author's Response: I totally agree thanks!
Title: A Real Detention 12 Aug 2008 2:43 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! he called him son! Beautiful. I hope he'll say it to him when he can hear it next time. And there's nothing like tabasco to cure a nasty mouth, LOL! All my kids know that. Can't wait to see what's next.

    Author's Response: Well, you'll have to wait and see.  Tabasco sauce-ugh! There's some action up next!
Title: A Real Detention 12 Aug 2008 2:34 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant! That mouthwash--ugh! Glad MY mom never thought of that one. And I loved the hug at the end too. Aww!

    Author's Response: Me too! LOL! Hugs are always good!
Title: A Real Detention 12 Aug 2008 2:30 pm
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The opening scene btwn Harry & Ron was wonderful, I laughed at Ron touching Harry's arm to see if he was "real". This whole chapter was excellent. Sev was fair but not overly harsh and Harry has learned, hopefully, not to test him. And the forgiveness bit was wonderful too.

    Author's Response: Yup, Ron is quite a character.  Glad you found the punishment fair, I know some didn't, but oh well, it's my story.
Title: A Real Detention 12 Aug 2008 8:12 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    The punishments were just and I love that Sev gave him a hug afterwards and told him he was forgiven. Very good love the father son relationship that is developing

    Author's Response: Severus here is behaving like a real dad would after punishing his child, though Harry doesn't realize it yet since he's never had a real dad.  Their relationship will continue to grow, though not without some more misunderstandings etc along the way. 

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