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Reviews For Atoning The Past
Title: The Wards and Occlumency 18 Sep 2008 9:32 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I like it so far. It's pretty well written and I love Tonks and the rest of the Order. Not sure about Snape yet, he seems to be softening pretty quickly, but maybe that's just because it's way too late for me to be up. In any case, it's an interesting story that I look forward to following.

    Author's Response: Snape is both a little hard on Harry and softening in the first chapter...but don't think he's OOC yet...he's that way for a reason. I hate when assumptions are made about a character as to how they act without knowledge of what happened before this character came into the scene...anyway thanks for the review. I love Tonks and the most members of the order...and enjoy next chapter
Title: The Wards and Occlumency 18 Sep 2008 8:49 am
Reviewer: Bourtreehillian (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice. Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: thanks for the review...really appreciate it and enjoy next chapter

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