Brother? Severus has a brother in the story? Are Harry's magical blocks made by Albus or are they self inflicted from when the Dursley's used to punish him for accidental magic?
Oh lalalalalalalalalal. The story is just so interesting. Dumbledore seems evil. Is he? I want to see the Dursley's punishment. I love the superpower!Harry.
Oh, I loved it! Your writing style is just so awesome! I truly loved it. I have only seen two authors with your writing style. One is you and the other is Anthezar. Oh, how I love it, absolutely love it. I love Snape's POV. Its so funny!
You know what? Severus has gone mad. Arguing with himself.
I really like the way you portray Severus! Oh, gave me the laughs. What is it on Harry's feet?
I love the way you have written Severus' inner voices. And the fact that Snape of all people has a Hermione-voice (not to mention the Ron one)... :P
| Title: Chapter 35
| 20 Jan 2016 3:48 pm
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| Reviewer: PharaohsLoyalMagician (Anonymous)
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Noo! I cannot believe it's the last chapter on here for now. Okay my drama side has made itself heard. Sorry about that. :) You're story is so lovely and awesome and, by far, my favorite story on here and probably any other websites. I love all your twists and surprises and I cannot think of any as bad or nonsensical. I could get yelled at but the way Dumbledore thinks makes sense if one factors in he's intelligent and I know sometimes I can think the way he does but the way I was raised prevents me from acting like he does (no matter how much I wish I could speak my mind at times.) Anyways, off topic. I especially love reading bonding between Draco and Siri and Remy. As well as Harry and Sev and than Harry and Ron. As well as that Hermione isn't as bad but still different and I've never read where she's like this and I think it's awesome that Sev wants to guide her to keep her good. I cannot wait to read what's going on with Sev and Ron ans what happened and what's with the "staring contest" and what will happen. I also hope now that Sev has been proven to be stronger than he thinks that he can take over the lessons for Harry and help his friends still. I also wonder if the wards will pass back to Dumbledore or stay with Sev and this be a way Dumbeldore isn't so spread and if this factored into Dumbledore's plans. I also loved reading on how Siri healed Sev and called him his brother and I hope there's more bonding between the three adults. I am so happy Sev is being so wonderful in here and yeah...there's not enough words to express how much I love reading this story and my twin is absolutely going to love it. I think you're a most brilliant author and writer and this deserves a twenty on my scale. Cheers and ta for this wonderful story. I know it takes a lot of time to make it how you want or figure out what to do and the courage to post. I'm still working on the courage part. Bye!^_^
| Title: Chapter 7
| 18 Jan 2016 1:45 pm
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| Reviewer: PharaohsLoyalMagician (Anonymous)
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This was a wonderful chapter. I love how Severus bought him a duplicate clothes of his own and got him the broom and treated him like any loving father would. I am glad he stood up for himself to Hermione and I can see why Ron would get angry and how is so calm. I cannot wait to read more. Eselcially with what is happening with Draco and most of the Slytherins. A part of me wonders if they'll start being civil towards others now that they no longer to be under him. Cheers and ta.
like nerissa and severus pairing!!
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