Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 4 13 Oct 2008 7:13 am
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like the way you write Severus and Harry interacting,thanls for the update.

    Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! I'll have another update up soon, I'm just waiting for it to be betaed.
Title: Chapter 4 13 Oct 2008 12:27 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I really loved this chapter! You wrote the tension between Dumbledore and Severus very well, and if anyone is a match for Dumbledore, it's Severus. I'm so glad that he's so determined to help Harry and to take guardianship. Harry needs Severus on his side.

    And the scene with Harry and Severus is wonderful. Harry really is powerful, isn't he? I can't wait to read the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!!!! I was so worried about the scene with Sev and Dumbles! And, of course they're going to but heads soon. And Harry can hold his own, though he doesn't yet know it.

    I'm so glad that scene was ok. I was afraid they both would seem too OOC, with Sev beng nice and Hary being respectful.... I'll try to have another one up very soon!!! 

Title: Chapter 4 12 Oct 2008 5:32 pm
Reviewer: ankita (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hey why wd u expect ppl to hate it...its good
Title: Chapter 4 12 Oct 2008 7:15 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like your story.

    Snape is perhaps alittle OOC, but that's OK. You made it clear that he has been rethinking his thoughts about Harry for the past couple of years, so his feelings now make sense.
    I am wondering why Dumbledore is not more caring.
    Please keep writing.

    Author's Response: Thank you! Dumbledore is a mystery.....He's disappointed. I'll have another chapter up very soon, I assure you!!
Title: Chapter 4 12 Oct 2008 4:59 am
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Very original and skilful. Sharp writing and crisp, well-developed characters. A true pleasure to read. Well done!

    Author's Response: Wow. Thank you! Thank you so very much!!!
Title: Chapter 4 12 Oct 2008 4:54 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it. Really. I don't know if Dumbledore was out of character or not. And it really didn't matter. The way you wrote him made the perfect foil for Severus. Wandless and silent magic,huh? Sev's certainly going to have his hands full teaching Harry, won't he? Last but not least, I loved the last paragraph. That was a great place to end the chapter.

    Author's Response: I feel so warm and fuzzy right now. Thanks so much for your review!! I'm so glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 4 12 Oct 2008 3:24 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    I respectfully submit to you that Severus is nothing if not elegantly efficient in his speech. It both fits his character AND scans better, if he were to end this sentence thus: "There were enough images of downright torture to upset even you, the Ultimate Optimist.”

    Good chapter!

    Author's Response: Yay!!! Thank you so very much. I was afraid Sev was a bit mild in his rant...and I guess not! I'll have another update up as soon as I can. Thanks again!!
Title: Chapter 4 12 Oct 2008 2:58 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it, update soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I  will, soon.
Title: Chapter 4 12 Oct 2008 1:53 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    i loved it and i truely hope severus gets guardianship of harry, severus should place a spell on dumbles so that he can't interfere. the way dumbles acted sent shivers down my spine

    Author's Response:

    Hmmm.....A apell....Now there's a thought......

    Thanks so much, I'm so glad you liked it!! Of course Severus will get Guardianship of Harry. And yes, Dumbles is a bit off....and I have no idea why....

    Thanks again. I'll try to post soon!!! 

Title: Chapter 4 11 Oct 2008 11:58 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Very sweet, very nice. Snape's getting hooked!

    I like your humour, and your writing style. Can't wait to see where the relationship is going. It is apparant that Snape is finally beginning to see Harry for who he is, not as a James Potter lookalike.

    Author's Response: YES!! Don't you think It's about time?? Lol. I'm so glad you liked it. I'll try to have another chapter up very soon, k? Thanks again!!!

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